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    Anton Storm looking to get signed

    I have never tried E-fedding before so please bare with me haha! SO any feedback on my introduction promo would be appreciated.
    I also as well live in the UK, so not sure how the timings will work in relation to posting promos and things.
    Also a lot of these sections were not really applicable so I have removed them :s



    Character name: Anton Storm


    Height: 6'0

    Weight: 221lbs

    Age: 28 Years old

    Face/heel/tweener: Face

    Style of wrestling (brawler, high flyer, technical, etc.): Brawler/Striker with elements of high flying

    A minimum of five perfected moves your character does in a match (feel free to separate your moveset into categories ie basic strikes, signatures etc.):
    1 - Signature - Pumphandle slam
    2 - Signature - Handspring in to spinning Enziguri
    3 - Basic stikes - X-Pac style mid section kicks and Tornado clothesline
    4 - Running moves - Running Hurricanrana and Running Heel kick
    5 - Submissions - Cloverleaf

    6 - Ground attacks - Springboard splash and standing moonsault
    7 - Diving moves - Flying crossbody and Flying elbow
    8 - Corner attacks - Sliced Bread/Dudleydog
    9 - Grapple moves - Judo Toss, Fisherman buster and Jumping DDT

    A minimum of one finishing move, and a maximum of three:

    1 - Running Axe kick
    2 - Reverse 450 splash

    Base pic for your character (please include the name of the base pic):

    Rob Conway if that is what you mean by Base name haha

    Theme music: Storm Coming by Gnarls Barkley

    Introduction promo of at least 10 lines introducing your character to us:
    The Name is Anton Storm and I come from the tough streets of Blackburn in the North of England. My life like most has not been simple, I grew up in quite a poor family with alcoholic parents, had little to no friends and spent most of my education being teased for not wearing the right clothes or have the latest gadgets. Following the death of my father and my older brother abandoning us all I have left now is my mother. She however has not been able to provide the greatest of support. The only support I get is from transferring my feelings of having to fight to make ends meet and gain acceptance from anyone I can is by actually fighting my way all the way to the top. I over the last several years have hustled and bustled to get the money to train in numerous different self defense arts. It was 2 years ago that I was on the cusp of death following an unprovoked attack in a late night bar in Tokyo that led me to meet who would soon to become my mentor who only went by the name Mr Lethal. He has given me all the knowledge that he possesses and now wants me to conker the world. Not only for me, but so I can finally help my mother before its too late.

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    Re: Anton Storm looking to get signed

    Looks good, cant wait to get Anton started!

    As far as suggestions go, go to the promo threads and read through. Cyrus Truth is great at descrptive writing andcsetting the scene, ETE is great at the dialogue, Sully and TGO are amazing with creativity, Prodigy for storytelling, Jiggy for presentation and cutting his opponents deep...Everyone brings something yo the table. Try to take a little from everyone.

    If you have any questions, the moderators/bookers are Jiggy, Jimmy King, The Golden One and myself. We typically post promo threads, give you around 7 days to post a promo, and then we grade the promos and write the show.

    Please dont get discouraged if you lose a few matches. The writers here have been around a few years. You'll win some and lose some, but as long as you creare a great atory, you'll have fun.

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    Re: Anton Storm looking to get signed

    Welcome to the show!
    Last edited by Sully; 09-07-2019 at 08:55 PM.

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    Re: Anton Storm looking to get signed

    Welcome to the FWA.





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    Re: Anton Storm looking to get signed

    Thanks everyone! Excited to get started!!

    I certainly aint afraid at losing! I can easily become the new James Ellsworth hha

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