Fight Night 11/22/13 Promo Discussion

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Discuss and review your fellow travelers' promos.

Please don't ask for a review without giving one first yadda yadda yadda.

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I now proclaim Stevenson the NEW and DEFENDING Speedy title.

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Gabrielle: The beginning description felt like it was a montage video of the cruel world with Gabrielle walking into frame making it all better, which isn't a bad thing. The scene was very metaphoric and everyone knows I am a sucker for deeper meanings and metaphors. You said you struggled in this promo but it doesn't show as the dialogue is very well done more than usually so. You changed the route of your character in recent weeks and this week you really shined in that area. You cleared up your relationship with Ashley and how it has no effected yours with Stu which I liked and overall you really had shown me how this new character works... but is it really a new Gabbie or the same Gabbie in new make up. I look forward to finding out and you did show cracks of that old Gabbie which I really liked. Great promo Jacob.

[ETE]

Ryan Hall The main thing that stands out to me about this promo is the creativity and the swerve. When you start to read it the labels seem obvious, but you went a different route and targeted other aspects of the characters. It all fits really well too. You can call Gabby a Snake and Ash a slut, etc. So big kudos on that for seeing how you can tie these labels to different people. As always with a Ryan Hall promo it was brilliantly written, a wordplay masterpiece, a real joy to read. Ryan Hall right now with all pretense gone and embracing his 'Inferno' is probably the best he's ever been, I always look forward to reading your promos and this certainly was no exception.

[Shaun to the Maxx]

My promo's up... Two in a row, for a new character... A personal best, folks...

Ryan Hall - For me personally, this is a thousand times better than last week. I love the concept. I love the twist you took on defining your partner/opponents true characteristics and not obvious labels. And most of all, the logic makes total sense. I really have to hand it to you for that. I, and probably most of us... Wouldn't make such comparisons, in comparisons to those characters the way you did. I have to completely steal what ETE said. Wordplay masterpiece.

Gabrielle - I shouldn't even bother trying to critique ETE's promos... The dialogue is flawless, which is saying something. Most people who try to come off as eloquent as you, end up being to wordy. Especially in this one, it just comes off fantastically. And everything just comes together and paints a great picture of the situation, what's going on, etc. Beautiful stuff.

Carmine - You're going to eat those Journal Pages!!! Nuff said!

Sarah Wolf - Burial job, much? lol Short, sweet and to the point of an ass whippin'. Made me laugh out loud a few times. Solid promo man.

[RainShaker]

sorry to Stevie. family emergency kind of prevented me from doing promo. my bad dudes