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    ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION

    THE ROSTER FOR THE NEW ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION WILL BE THE FOLLOWING, WITH FREE AGENTS DRAFTER AS WELL.

    This is all fictional, so please enjoy the stories & don't take them too seriously. I will try all different types of things, think of my BTB as old meets new. There may be times I will say pg rating sucks, but that's mostly tongue in cheek. I loved the attitude era it was a different time, but times change, but that doesn't mean I can;t have fun with mine. Think of my BTB as anything really goes, there will be many things I do that will take place in my BTB that will obviously never ever happen. Then there will be some things that very well may happen, as some of you guys will see as my ideas for matches, promo's etc expand as I expand the characters. So guys please enjoy the shows as a bit of fun, I love doing them. But I try to do some things I wish were done these guys were around & then there are things I will do that will be spur of the moment stuff too.

    All in all it's about having fun, isn't it guys. We all know Undertaker, Stone Cold, Sable, John Heidenreich & HBK are passed it, but who really cares. Didn't you ever wonder what would have happened if we saw say, Sheamus vs The Rock. Steve Austin vs Goldberg, or even Sable vs Undertaker after the infamous face off practically during the hardcore Raw era. Then there is the new vs old meeting of the generations which is another twist I want to explore with my BTB from their WWE attitude era storyline from their historic hostage angle on Raw, as well as the current era & future. Well this is the style of my BTB. There will be Superstar vs Superstar, Diva vs DIVA & Intergender.

    I have read many fine works on this site & I came up with this concept, whilst I enjoy seeing the odd blood split too much of it can also be to much. So by combining past, with present & future with recruits added from all walks of life into my BTB, like body builders, swimsuit models, Olympics, Gladiators who came from tv shows, like these names who are on on WWE or TNA like Matt Morgan, Mason Ryan & Magnus to name a few to emerge from, etc. So basically think of some of these stars like the wrestling franchise games produced for Xbox & PS 3 games W W E WRESTLEMANIA 90's & early 2000's household names meets the present. Eventually I will phase out the older guys & gals, but not for a while, so imagine all the stars are at their best & in the peek of their careers. I will place there BTB ages so you get a feel for the concept I'm describing.

    I have looked at so many great BTB on this site & I wanted to take a bit out of everything, as well as make sure I show you guys the divas, the tag teams & solid mid carders that are now quickly ignored by the new suits from University & ignore many things we loved about the WWE. Sure some story angles I cover will not be everyone's cup of tea, but I hope you give it everyone opportunity to grow on you & enjoy the other bits you want. I know my show goes for three hours, but I would rather do it this style, then rush through a show doing only three or four matches, by giving as many an opportunity of possible & they slowly phasing superstars & divas out. We all have different styles from short summaries, to review type shows, to short & sweet match detail & solid promo with very little wrestling described, but I wanted to produce a show with something 4 everyone

    I know in today's era, promo's are so important, if not more important then wrestling matches, but I grew up in a era where it was a bit of everything. Were the was zany Antics, funny, outrageous, weird, bizarre, crazy, exciting, moving, action & most of all a pressure to watch. But also I enjoy the present stuff too, because that was then this is now, so times change & you have to change with it. So please strap yourselves in & enjoy the ride. Please guys don't judge a book by it's cover & be scared off by the length of my shows, again enjoy what you want from it. I'm sure there are certain aspects of Raw & Smackdown, or TNA or ROH that may not appeal to everyone, but we enjoy them & wait for the stuff we enjoy the most. Besides you could be pleasantly surprised at the concept I am trying to achieve & vision of my BTB & that is a bit of everything for everyone. So FINALLY if you guys say to yourselves this guy is nuts, but wild, that's what I was aiming at with my BTB, & then you'll hopefully say so be it, it's his let him do as he pleases, that's also what I'm aiming for too.

    P.S There will be a number of belts on both shows so I will update you as often as I can to keep you all updated on the belt situation.





    ROSTER


    GENERAL MANAGER OF RAW
    ARNOLD SCHWARAENEGGER




    ROSTER RAW

    CM PUNK 28 years old
    THE ROCK 30 years old
    JOHN CENA 28 years old
    TRIPLE H AGE 32
    MASON RYAN 23 YEARS OLD
    BATISTA 31 years old
    KANE ( MASKED ) AGE 30
    UNDERTAKER AGE 33
    MIZ 24 YEARS OLD
    BIG SHOW 35 years old
    HEATH SLATER 24 YEARS OLD
    JUSTIN GABRIEL 23 YEARS OLD
    DAVID OTUNGA 24 years old
    MICHAEL McGILLICUTTY 23 years old
    HUSKY HARRIS 25 Years Old
    KOFI KINGSTON 26 years old
    EVAN BOURNE 25 Years OLd
    MARK HENRY 30 years old
    SHAD 28 years old
    JTG 24 years old
    CHRIS MASTERS 28 Years old
    ZACK RYDER 26 years old
    TYLER REX 25 years old
    R TRUTH 28 years old
    SKIP SHEFFIELD AKA RYBACK 25 years old
    JACOB NOVAK 24 Years old
    MICHAEL TRAVER 22 years old
    PERCY WATSON 24 years old
    DERRICK BATEMAN 22 years old
    SETH ROLLINS 22 years old
    DEAN AMBROSE 23 years old
    RAMON REIGNS 23 Years old
    CONSEQUENCES CREED 25 years old
    ANTONIO CESARO 25 YEARS OLD
    RICHIE STEAMBOAT 21 Years Old



    FREE AGENTS SUPERSTARS DRAFTED TO RAW

    GOLDERBG 30 years old
    JERICHO 29 years old
    SHELTON BENJAMIN 26 years old
    CHARLIE HAAS ( BECOMES E W W F EMPLOYEE AFTER MITB PPV ) 26 years old
    AJ STYLES ( BECOMES E W W F EMPLYEE AFTER MITB PPV ) 27 years old
    JAMES STORM (INVOKED AFTER SURVIVOR SERIES ) 29 years old
    ROBERT ROODE ( INVOKED AFTER SURVIVOR SERIES PPV ) 28 years old
    JON HEIDENREICH ( INVOKED AFTER GREAT AMERICAN BASH ) 31 YEARS OLD
    MR KENNEDY ( POST NO WAY OUT ).28 years old
    AUSTIN ARIES ( POST ROYAL RUMBLE PPV ) 24 years old
    MARCO JINDRAK (POST NO WAY OUT ) 27 YEARS OLD
    THE BOOGEYMAN ( POST BADD BLOOD PPV ) 33 YEARS OLD
    ELIJAH BURKE ( POST BATTLE OF THE SEXES PPV ) 26 YEARS OLD
    LANCE STORM ( POST BAD BLOOD PPV ) 30 YEARS OLD
    ​SID VICIOUS ( POST SUMMER SLAM PPV ) 33 YEARS OLD



    DEVELOPMENT CONTRACTS

    DON YATES
    ( FORMER ATLAS BRITISH GLADIATORS POST GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV )
    RING NAME WILL BE
    STEVE BEAST 28 years old
    MOVE SET

    BIG BOOT
    SWINGING NECK BREAKER
    CHOKELIFT
    BEAR HUG
    FULL NELSON SLAM
    AVALANCHE SUPERPLEX
    REVERSE SUPLEXES SLAM
    DIRTY PUNCH (
    TURNBUCKLE CORNER )
    RUNNING POWER BOMB
    CAMEL CLUTCH
    SPINNING DOUBLE AX HANDLE
    CORKSCREW LEG DROP (
    OFF TOP TURNBUCKLE PAD )
    HOLDING HEADBUTT

    FINSIHERS
    BEASTLY RAGE (
    FULL NELSON into a POWERSLAM PIN )
    SUPERFLY SPLASH (
    TOP TURNBUCKLE )

    MIKE O'HEARN ( FORMERLY TITAN AMERICAN GLADIATOR GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV)
    RING NAME WILL BE
    MIKE TITAN 28 years old
    MOVE SET

    RUNNING RIGHT BOXING HOOK
    ELEVATED NECKBREAKER
    TOTAL WIPEOUT ( GORILLA PRESS SLAM INTO BACK BREAK )
    AVLANCHE SPLASH ( CORNER TURNBUCKLE )
    RUNNING BULLDOG
    RUNNING STO
    DOUBLE LEG BOSTON CRAB
    MANHATTERN DROP
    TITAN PLEX ( DRIVING OPPONENT FROM TOP TURNBUCKLE TO CANVASS DDT )
    COBRA CLUTCH
    LAST CALL
    SKY DIVE
    ACCORDION RACK

    FINISHER
    TITANTIC DROP ( DEATH DRIVER INTO SIT DOWN PIN )
    TOTAL WIPEOUT ( SUPERPLEX INTO POWERSLAM PIN OFF TOP TURNBUCKLE )




    RAW DIVAS

    BELLA TWINS 24 years old
    MARYSE 23 years old
    TRISH STRATUS 27 years old
    BETH PHOENIX 28 years old
    CHYNA 30 years old
    GAIL KYM 27 YEARS OLD
    MELINA 26 YEARS OLD
    LITA 26 YEARS OLD


    FREE AGENT DIVAS DRAFTED RAW

    APRIL HUNTER 30 years old
    TORRIE WILSON 25 years old


    MAXINE ( INVOKED AFTER GREAT AMERICAN BASH ) 22 years old
    CHRISTY HEMME ( POST GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV ) 25 years old
    VELVET SKY ( POST NO WAY OUT PPV ) 25 years old
    SABLE ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS ) 29 YEARS OLD
    ANGELINA LOVE ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS ) 26 years old
    SUMMER RAE ( POST BAD BLOOD PPV ) 20 years old
    ROSITA ( POST BADD BLOOD PPV ) 22 YEARS OLD
    COURTNEY RUSH ( POST BATTLE OF THE SEXES ) 25 Years old
    MADISON RAYNE ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS ) 26 years old


    DEVELOPMENT CONTRACT

    BETH HORN
    ( FORMER VENOM AMERICAN GLADIATORS POST SUMMER SLAM OUT PPV )
    RING NAME
    GODDESS 23

    REBY SKY
    (
    FORMER CHEERLEADER )
    RING NAME
    REBY SKYE 21


    SARAH BACKMAN
    ( FORMER SWEDISH GLADIATOR )
    RING NAME
    SARAH SPIRIT 21


    COMMENTATORS

    JESSE VENTURA JERRY KING LAWLER






    ROSTER


    SYLVESTER STALLONE
    ( GENERAL MANANGER OF SMACKDOWN )




    SMACKDOWN SUPERSTARS

    HBK 33 years old
    RANDY ORTON 27 years old
    DREW McINTRYE 23 years old
    SHEAMUS 25 years old
    D B SMITH 23 years old
    TYSON KIDD 24 years old
    EZEKIEL JACKSON 27 years old
    WADE BARRETT 25 years old
    CODY RHODES 24 years old
    REY MYSTERIO 32 years old
    ALBERTO DEL RIO 28 years old
    SIN CARA AKA MISTICO 24 years old
    JACK SWAGGER 23 years old
    TED DIBIASE JUNIOR 23 years old
    JOHN MORRISON 25 years old
    THE GREAT KHALI 32 years old
    DOLPH ZIGGLER 24 years old
    CHRISTIAN 30 years old
    ALEX REILLY 23 years old
    LANCE ARCHER 27 years old
    DANIEL BRYAN 26 years old
    MVP 30 years old
    BRODIUS CLAY 23 years old
    SANTINO MARELLA
    JINDER MAHAL 24 years old
    JOHNNY CURTIS 22 years old
    JEY USO 20 years old
    JIMMY USO 21 years old
    YOSHI TATSU 22 years old
    VLADMINIR KOZLOV 30 years old
    BRYAN SAXTON 23 years old
    CURT HAWKINS 24 years old
    TRENT BARRETA 21 years old
    DARREN YOUNG 23 years old
    TITUS O'NEIL 23 years old
    ANDY LEVENE 24 Years Old
    HUSKY HARRIS 24 Years Old

    FREE AGENT SUPERSTARS DRAFTED TO SMACKDOWN


    BROCK LESNAR 25 years old
    STONE COLD STEVE AUSTIN 33 years old
    EDGE 30 years old
    BOBBY LASHLEY 28 years old
    KURT ANGEL (INVOKED AFTER MITB PPV ) 33 YEARS OLD
    RVD (AFTER MITB PPV ) 30 Years old
    MATT MORGAN ( AFTER SURVIVOR SERIES PPV ) 28 years old
    SUICIDE (INVOKED AFTER GREAT AMERICAN BASH)
    ROB TERRY ( POST NO WAY OUT ) 23 YEARS OLD
    ALEX SHELLEY ( POST NO WAY OUT PPV ) 25 years old
    CHRIS SABIN ( POST NO WAY OUT PPV ) 27 years old
    MAGNUS ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS ) 27 years old
    GUNNER ( POST SUMMER SLAM ) 29 years old
    DESMOND WOLF ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS PPV ) 29 years old
    BOOKER T ( POST ROYAL RUMBLE ) AGE 30 Years old
    SAMOA JOE ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS ) 30 years old
    CARLITO ( POST BADD BLOOD PPV ) 27 YEARS OLD
    STING ( POST BADD BLOOD PPV ) 33 YEARS OLD
    JEFF HARDY ( POST SUMMER SLAM PPV ) 24 years old
    MATT HARDY ( POST SUMMER PPV ) 27 years old
    BRET THE HITMAN HART ( POST SUMMER SLAM ) 34 YEARS OLD
    BILLY KIDMAN ( POST ROYAL RUMBLE ) 29 YEARS OLD

    DEVELOPMENT CONTRACT
    SHANE BOND
    (
    GLADIATORS SHOW POST SUMMER SLAM PPV )
    RING NAME
    ATLAS 26 years old

    KARIM ROMEO WILLIAMS
    (
    AMERICAN GLADIATORS )
    RING NAME
    FUREY WILLIAMS 28 years old

    JUSTICE
    (
    AMERICAN GLADIATORS )
    RING NAME
    KRUSHER 26 years old

    WHITNEY JENE
    ( SAG Actress, Professional Model, 2nd Degree Black Belt Martial Artist )
    RING NAME
    WHITNEY 22 years old

    SMACKDOWN DIVAS


    EVE 24 years old
    KELLY KELLY 22 years old
    AJ Lee 22 years old
    ROSA MENDES 21 years old
    AKSANA 23 years old
    TIFFANY 23 years old
    KAITLYN 24 years old
    CANDICE MICHELLE 23 years old
    MICHELLE McCOOL 23 years old

    SMACKDOWN FREE AGENT DIVAS DRAFTED

    STACEY KEIBLER 27 years old
    KRISSY VAINE 25 years old

    MARIA KANELLIS ( INVOKED AFTER GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV ) 24 years old
    TESSMACHER ( INVOKED AFTER NO WAY OUT PPV ) 23 years old
    JENNIFER BLAKE ( INVOKED POST GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV ). 25 years old
    LACEY VON ERICH ( POST GREAT AMERICAN BASH PPV ) 21 years old
    KATIE LEA ( POST BAD BLOOD PPV ) 26 years old
    BRITTANY BEEDE ( INVOKED ROYAL RUMBLE PPV) 27 years old
    ALISSA FLASH ( POST BAD BLOOD ) 25 years old
    SANTANA GARRETT ( POST no way out ) 25 years old
    HANNAH BLOSSOM ( POST SUMMER SLAM PPV ) 24 Years old
    HOLLY BLOSSOM ( POST SUMMER SLAM PPV ) 24 Years Old
    CRYSTAL WHITE ( POST BADD BLOOD ppv) 25 Years Old
    AMBER O'NEILL ( POST NIGHT OF CHAMPIONS PPV ) 26 years old
    RHAKA KHAN ( POST ROYAL RUMBLE PPV ) 27 Years Old





    TRAINERS BOTH SHOWS


    WILLIAM REGAL
    FIT FINLAY
    RICKY STEAMBOAT
    AL SNOW
    SEAN MORLEY
    HARDCORE HOLLY
    CHAVO GUERRERO
    MADUSI MICELI
    SGT SLAUGHTER
    JIM ROSS ( promos )
    &
    JERRY LAWLER



    WRESTLERS WHO HAVE BEEN RELEASED SINCE E W W F BEGAN

    DIVAS

    -



    SUPERSTARS

    -



    TALENT SCOUTS

    RICK FLAIR
    MICK FOLEY
    FIT FINLEY
    JIMMY HART
    CHAVO GUERRERO
    MADUSI MICELI




    COMMENTATORS

    MICHAEL COLE (MC)JIM ROSS ( JR )
    EWWF RAW CHAMPION : MASON RYAN

    RAW INTERCONTINENTIAL CHAMPION : TORRIE WILSON





    SMACKDOWN US TITLE : DANIEL BRYAN
    EWWF SMACKDOWN CHAMPION : MATT MORGAN

    EWWF world TAG TEAM CHAMPION :THE MOTOR CITY MACHINE GUNS


    SMALL INTRODUCTION of the name of the show. Vince McMahon was told by his board of directors that he wasn't fit to run the company, so Triple H & Stephanie would run things. So they decided to go a different direction & I will let my shows unfold to allow you to see how I develop my BTB without giving all the details away right here, right now. Many things are happening behind the scenes, however most will be revealed in the opening few shows to set the tone for my BTB. So Triple H & Stephanie decided along with Shane McMahon playing as behind the scenes roll for them to change the name to show this show would be different from the one Vince McMahon ran, but will see what happens & whether the plan these three have will keep Vince McMahon from obtaining ownership of E W W F. The show will be called E W W F ( ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION) , because after all wrestling is about entertaining the fans to give them reason to watch week after week, month after month.



    The intro music concludes as we go to our ring commentators who are
    Jesse Ventura ( JV ) & Jerry King Lawler (JKL).



    COMMENTATORS

    JKL

    Welcome everybody to our very first ever show under the new E.W.W.F. banner.
    As I introduce my fellow commentator the one the only Jesse 'THE BODY ' Venutra,
    welcome Jesse.

    JESSE VENTURA :
    Well it's awesome to be here Jerry & back were I belong calling wrestling.
    But I have to say one thing (JKL) & that is that my old co-star from Predator just
    needs to keep riding my coat tails no matter what I do he needs to do it as well.

    JERRY KING LAWLER

    I knew u would say that Jesse, but how exciting to two former Governors on
    Raw one as a commentator the other as GM of Raw. Lets go to the ring to
    hear form our Raw



    RAW G.M

    ARNOLD SCWARENEGGAR

    Thank u everyone for your kind welcome. Please calm down everyone we too are as excited as you all are for our first show. As GM of Raw I promise you all we will do everything we can to make sure that we entertain each & every one of you. My role as GM will be to make the Raw show is the best one on the cable network. Since we are now in the 21st century we will make sure our shows reflect that as well. One thing we have done is drop the pg rating, I knew you would all be excited by that news.

    It is so exciting that we have been able to draft some great free agents onto the Raw roster as well to add to the one we had under the old banner. The night will commence with a title re-match between CM Punk vs John Cena who fought under the old WWE banner. I think it's only fitting & right that these two men get to have first crack on the title & open our show. As I mentioned in my opening remarks this is a show for the 21st century so to reflect that we will crown our first ever intergender champion. The divas have been campaigning to have this belt included on the Raw show as the divas want to prove they are more then just great looking & sexy.

    We aim to please lets get on with the show, as I hand it over to our ring announcer to introduce our opening match.

    MATCH 1

    VS

    CM PUNK ( RAW CHAMPION ) VS JOHN CENA

    **RING ANNOUNCER**

    The opening of the evening is for the E W W F Raw championship, introducing first the challenger he is a 8 time former heavyweight champion he is John Ce.............na.



    ****RING ANNOUNCER****

    His opponent is the E W W F
    Champion CM Pun............k.


    JV



    THE BELL SOUNDS TO START THE MATCH



    *****COMMENTATORS*****

    JERRY KING LAWLER ( JKL )

    JESSE 'BODY ' VENTURA ( JV )

    JKL

    The champion & challenger seize each other up as the move about whilst
    fans chant for Punk more then Cena. I'm going deaf from the fans chanting
    wildly Cena sucks.

    JV

    Cena goes for the collar tie up on the champion CM Punk which allows
    Cena to back Punk backwards to the ropes as he breaks cleanly to the
    boos of the fans.

    JKL

    It's really incredible how much the fans despise a face wrestler
    & cheer for a heel, I haven't heard anything like it since the
    megapowers clashed at wreslemania 5.

    JV

    Cm Punk quickly goes for a successful arm drug on Cena as he lands
    onto the canvass. Cena gets to his feet as Punk repeats the move
    three more times in a row.

    JKL

    Cena is now placed in a arm bar chicken wing hold by Punk who has
    many moves in to draw from, as Cena quickly counters by frieman
    hoisting Punk onto his shoulders to dumb him like yesterday's
    news. Punk landed awkwardly on his backside in the corner to the right
    of the main screen.

    JV

    For Cena to prevail he will need to use strength, but Punk is very strong
    for go his size as he has done his finisher on many wrestlers bigger & stronger then him.

    JKL :

    Cena locks up to Punk as they form another collar tie up, this tmie however it's
    Punk's tur to send Cena to the canvass with a quick fire drop down toe hold as the
    challenger's face slams into the canavss. Cena is just making sure his nose
    isn't bleeding from that.

    JV

    I like how quick Punk can ulta his style accoring to what's happening in the match,
    very good tactically in the ring as Punk drop kicks Cena to the chest, gets up to
    repeat a drop kick to his face then cena gets up to get a double drop kick to his
    face from CM Punk that has Cena hit the canvass he rolls to the ropes on the
    far side of the ring.

    JKL :

    But Punk refuse to allow Cena to get up as he levels him wiht brutul kicks to his ribs,
    midriff then pulls Cena up to drop kick him so hard to catapults Cena ot the floor outside
    on the far side as the fans mock Cena.

    JV

    I like the fact Punk isn't allowing Cena to get a briefer outside as he goes after him,

    as Cena gets to his feet to belly to belly overhead suplex Punk that sends him
    flying into the steps.

    JKL

    Cena goes after Punk quickly applies a waist lock to Punk on the ouside as
    Punk reaches up to grab the ropes to try to pull himself back in the ring as well
    as trying to break the hold Cena has on him.

    JV

    Punk was smart to do that has he broke Cena's release. Cena slides under the
    bottom rope to get to Punk whom knee drops Cena to the back of his head.

    JKL

    Cena is pulled up by Punk so he multipule kicks Cena many kicks that
    eventually forces the challenger to cover up.

    JV

    Great move by Punk to apply a half nelson to Cena who fell to the canvass
    as this will wear down Cena & not allow him to get proper oxygen in his lungs
    to obsorb the hold Punk has on Cena.

    JKL

    So true Punk has Cena off his game presently, Cena suddenly gets to
    his feet to brawl with Punk whose kicks lashes out at Cena kicking at his
    legs yet again.

    JV

    this time it makes Cena hobble as Cena haymakers Punk to the face
    to deck him & buy some time, but Punk bounces straight back up to
    double drop kick Cena to the face.

    JV

    Punk is really on the mark with those drop kicks so far he needs to make
    sure he doesn't go to the well one time too often as Cena will eventually
    counter it.

    JKL

    Cena this time does as you stated ( JV ) only moments ago. Cena waited
    a fraction of second longer that time before coming in to follow on CM Punk.

    JV

    That's excuatly what I was talking about. Cena saw him enough times
    toeventually block one. C M Punk atempted another drop kick as Cena
    swatted his legs again. C M Punk across the face as he land on his knees
    on the canvass.

    JKL

    Cena on the move use the ropes to rebouind shoulder tackle Punk who hip
    tosses Cena wiht a counter then Punk fist drops Cena to the face but Cena
    moved out of harms way allowing himself to get up whilst Pnuk shakes his
    fist to make sure he didn't break it.

    JV

    Cena belly to back suplexes Punk as he pulls him up to is feet immediately
    setting up Punk with a side effect that rattles Punk as he lands back first
    on the canvass with Cena weight crashing down across his chest to add to
    his discomfort in the mve performed by the challenger John Cena.

    JKL

    Cena climbs to the top buckle waiting for Punk to get up as he flaming ***
    drop Punk to quickly roll him over for the count 1....2.... he kicks out.

    JV :

    Now it's Pu
    nk turn to counter Cena. Cena stands up to float over suplex Punk
    with great elevation. Cena gets to his feet then stands over him. I hate this move
    by Cena as he 5 star knuckles Punk who spring to his feet to hoist Cena using
    his momentum to Go To Sleep to Cena the challenger but he lands near the
    ropes on the entrance side of the ring.

    JKL

    Punk moves quickly to untangle Cena from the ropes to cover him 1...2..,
    Cena kicks out.Punk
    sensing the tide has turned in his favour applies a anaconda
    submission hold on the challenger..

    JV

    Punk needs to try to finish this now, but cena back rolls out of it to pull up Punk to
    belly to back high suplex drive Punk into the canvass making sure he felt it.

    JKL

    Cena immediately pulls the champion to his feet to attitude adjustment the
    champion with interest he makes the cover 1,2,3 it's over the fans give him a
    mixed response to his victory

    JV

    As much as I loat the decision Cena is a worthy winner on our opening
    night you'd think if the wrestlers weren't as ring rusty Punk would have held
    on for longer, as we go to the ring annoucer for the decision

    ****RING ANNOUNCER*****

    The winner of the match & new E.W.W.F CHAMPION




    THE END OF MATCH 1




    COMMENTATORS

    JV

    So far, so good Jerry, oh no I hear the music of the game
    Triple H, now there's man who is rigthly pissed off.

    JKL

    I would not like to be the guy who crosses his path.

    JV

    not wrong he grabs the microphone out of the ring announcer
    hand refusing to even allow him to introduce him.


    TRIPLE H IN THE RING TALKING


    I'm still trying to understand what the hell happened to me. One minute I'm CEO
    of WWE the next thing I know I'm stripped of the roll & placed on the active roster
    in the E.W.W.F. Some guy named Vinny McCann who I'd never heard nor anyone
    else comes along & buys the company lock, stock & both smoking barrels. I was
    tricked, I thought I was signing the papers to finalize me being the CEO but as
    it turns out I was signing papers to allow this guy to buy the company.

    I understand he has driven up in his limo & he will come to the ring to offically reveal
    who the hell he is to the world. So I demand to see who this person is right here &
    right now or I'm coming to get you & drag your *** into this ring. Let me make one thing
    clear to all of you hear I've never met this new owner, but he obviously has no idea who
    his dealing. So come on who ever you are, I demand to see you.



    VINNY McCANN COMES TO THE RING
    ( Vince McMahon)


    What's wrong Hunter you look like you've seen a ghost. Did u honestly think that
    Vincent Kennedy McMahon ) would ride off into the sunset & not fight back. Hunter
    you under estimated me, I taught you everything about the WWE inside the ring but
    not outside it. I have delt with Donald Trump, Ted Turner billionaires. Did you honestly
    think I could be out smarted by a wrestler when it comes to business outside the ring.

    TRIPLE H :

    No way, no way it's you. I see you, but I can't believe it

    VINCE McMAHON

    You can bet your *** on it, that it's Vince McMahon. Your probably wondering
    what the hell happened. See I Know you & my ungrateful daughter, never read the
    contract in full, you both tend to skip through it. I knew that was my golden chance.
    So I changed my name by depol & the rest as they say is history.


    TRIPLE H :

    So along I was dealing dealing with you, Vince McMahon.

    V.M

    Down to business, Hunter. I just returned from the office you know where it is don't you.

    TRIPLE H :

    Yes Vince, you know I do.


    V.M

    Of course you do it's the one you back stabbed me.


    TRIPLE H :

    I TOLD you it wasn't my decision.

    V.M

    But you did say the family agreed with them. I even found the blood soaked
    knife you were kind enough to leave on my desk still dripping in blood, figure
    of speech of course.
    TRIPLE H

    What are you getting at I'm I fired or not Vince.

    V.M

    Hold on I'm getting to it.
    Well I just held a meeting with the board directors &
    since you signed the papers to turn over ultimate power to me, I had great
    pleasure in firing each & every one of them. I wanted to save the best for last.

    TRIPLE H :

    I still can't believe this is happneing I was meant to be the CEO & run the show,
    now your telling me I'm sacked.

    V.M :

    Triple H your not sacked & the only reason I won't sack you is because you are
    a great wrestler, there is no way I will loss you to some other organisation.

    TRIPLE H

    What makes you think, I'll stay after tall this has happened

    V.M :

    Hey pal, you signed a 5 year contract don't you remember. Triple h you can
    either fall in line & return to the ring as a active wrestler or you can sit & rot on your
    *** for 5 years, see who wants a washed up wrestler 5 years out of the business.

    TRIPLE H

    So the GM's you have got on both shows remain or was that a gimmick too.

    V M :

    None of that changers, what you think I'm going to appoint you GM of Raw after
    what you did to me. Hell I'm evening allowing the intergender championship to remain.
    That idea was one Arnold came up with & to be honest I really like it. It's both bold
    & new, plus it a great opportunity to stick it to all those sponsors & my ex-wife for having
    the pg rating for so long. So what'll it be Hunter.

    Triple H

    I'll stay, as if I have a choice.

    V.M

    Great even though your dressed in the same suit you releaved me of my duties, you
    look ready for action, your match is up next & Arnold has given me permission to
    pick your opponent & it's BILL GOLDBERG & that match is up right now, ring announcer
    come in here in do your job.



    **************MATCH 2 TRIPLE H VS BILL GOLDBERG********

    VS


    *****RING ANNOUNCER*****


    In the ring at the moment, weighing in at 255 pounds from Greenwich, Connecticut TRIPLE H..


    COMMENTATORS
    JKL

    I had no idea, did u have any idea Jesse, Vinny was behind this.

    JV

    Sometimes King it's not a bad idea to sit in on the production meetings,
    I was there with the two General Managers

    JKL

    I thought you were always against Vince

    JV

    Sure we but heads, but Vince has many loyal friends who know Vinny or Vince
    has done a lot of great things & maybe down the track he will be finished,
    but he should have been allowed to finish on his turns, he built the company
    & if need be he can wreck it.

    JKL

    We better allow the ring announcer to announce his
    opponent who is taking his time.


    ******RING ANNOUNCER********


    His opponent from Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S BILL GOLD......................................BERG


    *****COMMENTATORS*****

    ( JV ) ( JKL )


    JKL : I have no idea how Triple H can respond to this challenge.

    JV : Triple H looks a defeat man already.

    JKL : But Jesse u know these two don't get along either,

    JV : Why do u think he picked Goldberg, I agree they certainly have history between them.

    JKL: Make things worse for Triple H, not like Goldberg is walking down the ramp in a friendly mood, he eye balls Triple H whose head is slightly bowed, but enough to see the mood of Goldberg.



    *******************THE BELL SOUNDS TO START THE MATCH****************







    JKL : Triple H is in his dress shoes, business shirt & dress pants, he looks lost as he bell sounded to start the match.

    JV : Goldberg is stalking Triple H, who seems a million miles away, I hope Triple H made his peace with god today.

    JKL : Goldberg spears a Triple H lame as a lamb in the ring.

    JV : Triple H is curled up like a cat in front of a warm fire.

    JKL : Goldberg on is feet in attack position as he is prouncing & bouncing about full of rage. Triple H pulls himself up straining from the ache in his midriff. Triple H staggers away from the ring ropes as Goldberg has no sympathy for his predictment.

    JV : I have never seen Goldberg so mad he takes off as he spears Triple H for a 3rd time that hurt even more

    JKL ; You could hear the brutul impact from here. No kidding the attitude era is back on Monday night Raw under the new E W W F brand name.

    JV ; Triple H gets up eventually but he is standing on instict only nothing else. Got to admire his courage in these circumstances.

    JKL : Goldberg with his name echoing in the Pepsi Arena has no problem ripping Triple H's expensive CEO business shirt ripped off him.

    JV : As I said Jesse. I have never seen Goldberg this fired up & I witnessed him demolish Hulk Hogan.

    JKL : Goldberg delivers thunderous chops across the exposed chest of Triple H as he uses the ropes to keep him standing, Goldberg unloads the heavy bomb too, a 2nd then 3rd time.

    JV : The Goldberg chants continue to be chanted, as the building is shaking as if we were at the Superbowl.

    JKL : Meanwhile Goldberg has yanked Triple H to his feet by his right arm effortlessly, as he whips him by that same arm to the ropes.

    JV : Goldberg off the opposite ropes meets Triple H on his return in the middle of the ring with a another spear, did u hear his ribs crack.

    JKL : Did I not only hear it through our excellent effects microphones, hell you could also hear it without it. Goldberg is brutul tonight, making a major statement to Cena who won the E W W F Raw championship in the previous match.

    JV : Triple H is pulled to his feet yet again, however this time Goldberg allows Triple H to lean into him. Goldberg takes his time as he looks at the fans for approval then lets out a yelp as he hoists the game Triple H into the air.

    JKL : I have never seen Triple H manhandled like this before. Goldberg holds Triple H in the jackhammer positon it seems for ever for Triple H.

    JV : What impact. As Goldberg crushes Triple H with his vertical jackhammer then lands on top of Triple H simultaneously to pin him with smiling authority, as the ref makes the count.

    JKL : The ref makes the mercy count 1....2...3, it's over & there sounds the bell to end this match.

    JV : It's over (JKL), Goldberg has destroyed Triple H whose head was no were near this ring tonight after the soul crushing news he received & then the shock as to who tricked him. Goldberg stands over Triple H with his arm raised.

    JKL : As we go to the ring announcer for the decision



    ****RING ANNOUNCER*****



    The winner of the match GOLDBERG


    COMMENTATORS

    JV : Some will say Jerry, Triple H had it coming to him.

    JKL: Nonetheless it was totally brutal, what he got from Goldberg.



    THE END OF MATCH 2




    ****************CUT TO INTERVIEW BACK STAGE WITH THE ROCK**************.






    INTERVIEWER :

    Joining me at this stage, is the great one The people's CHAMPION, The Rock.

    THE ROCK : T

    hanks, good to be here. hold on. Finally The rock has come back to Den.....ver Colarodoooo.

    INTERVIWER

    Rock do you have an idea who your opponent will be tonight.

    THE ROCK

    Do you think it matters who my oppoent is.

    INTERVIEWER

    yes it does mat...

    THE ROCK

    It doesn't matter what you think, give me this microphone & go away, you monkey ***.
    The simple fact is, no matter who the E W W F have in store for the people's champion ,
    the great one & I do mean the great one will do as he always does & that is lay the
    smackdown on all there candy asses. I'm off to the ring .




    COMMENTATORS
    JKL : The great one is always ready for action ( JV).

    JV : Have to admit, Rock is one of my favorites he does bring it every single time & the fans love it.

    JKL : lets go straight to the ring announcer to anouncer our competitors for the next match.



    *******************RING ANNOUNCER***********



    ******************MATCH 3 THE ROCK VS UNDERTAKER VS JERICHO NO.1 CONTENDER TO THE E W W F RAW CHAMPIONSHIP***********************

    vs vs


    This match is a triple threat for the No 1 contender to the E W W F Raw championship, Introducing first from Hayward, Califronia weighing in at 260 pounds he is the people's champion The Rock.




    *****COMMENTATORS*****

    ( JV ) ( JKL )

    JKL :
    So glad the Rock is back, Jesse he is truly one of my all time favourites.

    JV : I have to admit I have heaps of time for The Rock, lets hear the intro to the second competitor.



    ****RING ANNOUNCER****



    The second man in the triple threat is from deathvalley weighing in 299 pounds The Underrtaker.



    ****COMMENTATORS****

    ( JV ) ( JKL )

    JKL :
    Undertaker has been in the ring with the best of the best, to have him here on E W W F Raw is awesome.

    JV : You know Jesse, this guy sends chills through me as he takes his time coming to the ring, Undertaker is so methodical with everything he does.

    JKL : Undertaker's entrancer is so long you could have a shower & have dinner & he'd still be only half way down the ramp as he is now.

    JV : I dare you to tell the deadman that

    JKL : No thanks I'm safer here.

    JV : Finally his in the ring as he take sis hat off then his eyes roll fomr the bakc of is head to stare down The Rock with the 3rd man about to come.


    ****RING ANNOUNCER****



    The third competitor from Tampa Florida weighing in at 225 pounds is Y2J Chris Jericho.



    ****COMMENTATORS****

    ( JKL ) ( JV )


    JV : Finally we have the three men in the ring ready for a war.

    JKL : A war it's gonna be too.

    JV : Can't wait I think Undertaker will win this match up.


    *********************THE BELL SOUNDS TO BEGIN MATCH 3************************



    JV : All three men are standing in there corners as they encage in some seizing up.

    JKL The Rock goes after Y2J, as they trade blows back & foward. Whilst the Undertaker observes whilst staying loose by slightly shadow boxing.

    JV : They land left & rights at each other a number of times. Undertaker picks his mark to step into the fry as he begins land his own punches. Undertaker unloading his left gab at Rock that gives him the wobbles, then he right hooks at Jericho.

    JKL : Jericho cops a second punch & The Rock cops a second punch too. Undertaker slowly winds up to fury right Jericho on his a chin that sends him to the canvass. The Rock tries to catch Undertaker off guard as he delivers people's punches to the deadman, landing shot after shot. Jericho smartly gets up but uses the chance to regroup. Undertaker huge clothes line knocks down Rock.

    JV : Jericho steps up then undertaker lands a vicious open hand uppercut to the throat of Jericho as he does the same to Rock who moved in quickly.

    JKL : Undertaker is in control of the triple threat for now, as he pulls Jericho to his feet then proceeds to powerful whip him to the turnbuckle as Jericho slams into them with full force. Undertaker follows up without hestiation to level Jericho still reeling with that wiht a powerful clothes line in the corner that knocks Jericho off his feet.

    JV : Those turnbuckle can be very unforgiving & then to be hit wiht the clothes line, makes you think maybe jericho at that moment hoped he was jamming with his band Fozzy. Undertaker unrelenting unloads massive bombs on Jericho as Jericho rocks back & foward from the forearm shots.

    JKL: Undertaker is set upon by Rock who lands strong people's punches to the deadman's face as Undertaker big boots Rock to fend him off but Rock left then rights Undertaker to whip him to the ropes as Undertakerr retruns to flying lariat take down the people's champion to a great reaction from the crowd.

    JV : Really like the way undertaker is pacing himself in the match. Undertaker's knows these two guys will have their second wind & he needs to be ready for it for he hasn't put them away by then. experience he knows this match is way too soon to end & he'll need all the petrol tickets when this match draws to a close.

    JKL : The great one is now whipped to the ropes on hius return he skips behind Undertaker very smoothly to from behind spinning German suplexes release Undertaker as he decks Undertaker neck first into the canvass jarring his neck. Undertaker feels his neck as he is groggy from a excellent counter by The Rock.

    JV : Rock turns his attention to Jericho who stands up as Jericho uses the ropes to trouble in paradise kick The Rock across his face great playing possum move by Jericho on Rock who didn't expected it.


    JKL : It's a credit to Jericho how he constantly reinvents himself as a professional wrestler really working at his craft. Jericho pummels Rock covering up to his face, as Undertaker gets up on is feet to from behind land powerful club shots then a double axe handle to the upper bakc of Jericho as he grasb his arm.

    JV ; The crowd yell Old School as Undertaker methodically walks Jericho to the corenr to walk along the ropes what the sight that is as the mobiles flash with undertaker landing a devastating blow across the back of the head of Jericho.


    JKL : Jericho rubs the back of his head as he looks pu to see Undertaker & Rock exchange punches as the pace of the match begins to go up a level.

    JV : Rock decks Undertaker after several exchange with a spinning 180 clothes line.

    JKL : Jericho gets to his feet to cop a spinning ddt from Rock.

    JV : Rock angerily stomps away at Jericho repeatedly whilst sitting up on the canvass, as Jericho tried to cover up. Undertaker steps up from behind to turn Rock around who stomps Undertaker rto his midriff once then twice before he lays the smackdown on him.

    JKL : Undertaker from behind leg chops Rock, then hurt him. Undertaker pulls up Rock to scoop him up to powerful body slam him with a solid response from the fans. as Undertaker slows the match down to his tempo.

    JV : Jericho from behind attacks Undertaker admiring his handy work on Rock by kicking away with thunderous blows to the back thigh of Undertaker. Undertakers attempts to hobble 180 to face Jericho who copntinues on his chopping frenzy with those kicks that must be leaving a huge bruise by now on his thigh.

    JKL : Undertaker out of desperation spins 180 through the air to catch Jericho with a spinning DDT take down, what a move as the fans chant Undertaker's name with gusto. Undertaker greets his teeth to stand up as he catches Jericho standing up with a side walk slam as Jericho tried to turn the table quickly, whilst UNdertaker was hobbling around the ring.

    JV : The Rock gets involved as he stomps away at jericho then Undertaker as Jericho & Rock off the ropes opposite side clothes line knock down each other they both had the same idea. All three men down in this triple threat match for the number one contender to the E W W F Raw Title match.

    JKL ; Who is first to his feet lays a powerful choke slam on Rock who was a close second to his feet, maybe who shouolder of stayed down a bit longer.

    JV ; This match has cerrtainly enhance these three mens profiles.

    JKL : Jericho tries quickly to stomp away at Undertaker's sore right knee which he does then as he makes him buckle slightly he back stabbers Undertaker great move by Y2J. Rock catches Jericho getting to his feet aftger nailikng the move on Undertaker rto clothes line knock down him as Jericho's head bounces off the canavss on impact.

    JV ; Rock spin 180 to see Undwertaker full steam ahead plant a big boot to his face thens ends Rock to the ropes as he rebounds form a short destance back UNdertaker uses Rocks' momentum to flapjack dumb hikm as The Rock clutches his ribs.

    JKL : Undertaker cops a code breaker from Jericho who waited for Undertaker to turn to face him as Jericho goers for the cover 1,2 as Udertaker thrusts his right shoulder off the canvass to break the count as quickly as he could.

    JV : Jericho stands up to get in the face of the ref for counting slow as the people's champion capitalises on this as he lands people's punches on Jericho, who is on dream street as UNdertaker off the ropes decides with the pace of the match lifting flying cross body Jericho.

    JKL: I've never seen Undertaker perform a cross body, but his so agile that nothing surprise me the deadman does. Undertaker then grabs Jericho by the throat to yank him to his feet to just as quickly choke slam Jericho back down to the canvass.

    JV : Rock from behind running leaping charging at the deadman, Lou Terez takes down the Undertaker. The Rock then unloads a heavily assult landing multipule fury rigths to Undertaker's face, as Jericho from behind using the ropes for momentum running drop kicks Rock to his face, using is agility as a weapon too.

    JKL: Jericho makes the pin cover on Undertaker the ref counts 1,2, the deadman kicks out. Jericho quickly covers The Rock still stunned by jericho's move as the ref counts 1,2 he kicks out too. Jericho is gettign frustrated with each kick out.

    Jv ; Jericho turns his attentions to Rock to by pummeling him now with vicious rights to his face as he lands 1,2,3,4, then 5 blows as Rock covers up eventually on the canvass.

    JKL : The crowd is certainly into this one, the pace is going up another gear as all three are now going for the big impact moves.

    JV : Rock gets to his as Jericho turned his attention to a prone UNdertaker who reaches up to Jerichoi fury righting him to triangle hold him, as the crowd goes wild taunting Y2J ot submitt. UNdertakerr has Jericho with his arm out as if he is planning to oblige the fans.

    JKL However The Rock seeing the predicament Jericho is in diving double ax handles Undertaker to the back of his head. Rock stands up as he grabs Rock around the throat who stomps away at him to make Undertaker release the choke slam the lay the smackdown on Undertaker, as Rock moves in to lay the sharp shooter on Jericho still feeling the effects of the deadman's triangle hold.

    JV : Undertaker this time makes the save as he from behind running big boots Rock to the bakc of his head then he uses the ropes ot come off them as Rock still has hold of Jericho's legs to double knee drop Rock to the back of his head.

    JKL : Undertaker gets to his feet with a bit of blood on his face as off the ropes running at full pelt flying lariat takes down Rock.

    JV : Undertaker gets up as he tries to draw strength from the fans cheering him on. Undertaker seems to rally from their energy. Underrtaker big boots Jericho to his face the he grabs Jericho by his throat then stomps Rock to his mdriff as he tried to get involved as UNdertakerr double choke slams Jericho & Rock with one arm each.

    JKL : Jericho & Rock are both down. Undertaker is on his knees then he looks up as if to draw strength form a urn he stands up to off the ropes running at Jericho & Rock who rose at the same time as they counter him to double over head back drop the Undertakerr with high elevation.

    JV : Undertaker is hurt, look at this Jericho lionsault splashes Undertaker to add to his misery. Jericho gets to his feet as Rock grabs him looking at the fans he rock bottoms Jericho.

    JKL : Jesse the crowd is on it's feet, axs the quicknes of the moves goes full steam ahead.

    JV : I have never witnessed the reaction live that Rock gets from the fans, when he is on a roll. Rock has whipped jericho to the ropes to plant him with his trademark Rock spine buster whilst Undertaker is still down near side of the ropes. Rock thatmeanwile has knocked the wind out of Jericho with the spine buster.

    JKL : The people's champion stares at the crowd who are on there feet. The Rock takes off as he comes off the ropes he nails Jericho with the people's elbow.

    JV : Did you see Jericho's body tremble from the impact. Rock goes for the pin as the ref counts 1,2, but from behind the deadman Undertaker back leg drops Rock across his neck to break the count just in the nick of time.

    JKL : Desperate times called for deserate merasures. The Rock gets up feeling the back of his head as he is comfronted by Undertaking coming off the ropes to spinning DDT ddt nail Rock face first to the canvass busting him open. The Rock is bleeding.

    JV : It's great to have the attitude era back isn't it Jerry. These men are showing how much they want to be the number one contender for the E W W F Raw Title.

    JKL : Undertaker gets up as Jericho delivers the codebreaker as Undertaker as he tried to choke slam him, what a counter by Jericho. Rock from behind reverse DDT's Jericho who was jogging on the spot trying to get friction into his legs to perform his lionsault. Rock rock bottoms Jericho to the canvass. Then the Rock covers him the ref counts 1 but Undertaker makes an important save. Now the Rock grabs Undertaker as he struggles in the sharp shooter.

    JV : the Rock has tunred him over he has it locked, will the deadman tap out but no he counters to triangle hold Rock before the submission hold does too much damage. The Undertaker brillantily used his legs to counter Rock's sharp shooter.

    JKL : Seeing Undertaker applying his triangle hold on Rock who is trying to fight on, uses the ropes to leaps high into the air to deliver a double knee drop on the lower back on Undertaker. Undertaker reeling is placed in the walls of jericho but The Rock makes the save this time, all three wrestlers are showing the effects of this triple threat number one contenders match.

    JKL : Y2J has put many wrestler away with this move & Rock knew that. UNdertaker gets to his feet feelng is lower back to go with his hobbling severe limb butr he still catches Rock off the ropes ot whilst falling backwards still deliver a almighty choke slam that bounces The Rock. Jericho covers The Rock 1,2, but Undertaker drags him off by his legs.

    JV : Undertaker stands up to deliver a brutul upper cut that decks Jericho. The Rock is pulled up as the Undertaker sets up Rock to tombstone him.

    JKL No way how did The Rock counter with is rock bottom. Undertaker isa flat on his back as the people's champion with the crowd urging him on makes the cover as the ref makes the count the crowd counts along 1,2, Undertaker kicks out then sits up, no way the Rock is stunned he looks at the fans as if to say I'm out of options.

    JKL : Jericho off the ropes runs into a undertaker who has stood up as he jumping side walk powerslam him with one arm. undertaker gets to his feet to pull up Rock to plant him with a choke slam no he lands on his fee to lay the smackdown on Undertaker.

    JV ; The Rock off the ropes spears Jericho who stood in the way of the people's elbow drop.

    JKL : Undertaker springs to life suddenly in all the mayhem. Where does Undertaker get the energy from as he hoists Rock in the air to tombstone him with quickness as he covers Rock eventually in the r.i.p pin, 1,2, as Jericho is unable to respond as the ref counts Rock's shoulder's pinned to the canvass.

    JV : 1,2,3 it's over (JKL) the
    Undertaker has won he is the new Number one contender for the E W W F raw champoinship, all three men are exhausted as they lie on their backs the fans clap as they shows their appreciation for a great triple threat.

    JKL : Not wrong Jesse as Undertaker is hobbling about as he takes in the crowd's reaction whilst the ref holds his arm in the air to signal the winner of the match .

    JV : As we go to the ring annoucer

    *****RING ANNOUNCER****


    The winner of the match & new number one contender for the Raw championship The Undertaker.






    ****COMMENTATORS*****

    ( JKL ) ( JV )


    was an epic match, as The Rock & Jericho are helped by the medicos back to the dressing room to seek treatment.

    JV : Defintely right there, (JKL), we have had three matches & all three have had there talking points, that certainly have the fans wanting more.

    JKL : These wrestlers are households already, so the fans appreciate them already, but it's still great to see the reaction there giving the superstars for putting their bodies on the line, can't wait for yet more action to come.


    *********************************THE END OF MATCH 3 **************************************************




    ********COMMENTATORS*************

    (JKL ) ( JV )

    word that will have a special announcement from our GM reguarding the vacaunt Intergender champion coming up real soon.

    JKL : How do you feel about this belt being introduced.

    JV : It doesn't bother me at all, Chyna did a great job as Intercontinential champion twice for memory.So why not it's difficult & the men & women will still have the ir own gender belts to fight for.

    JKL : We even had matches like Umaga vs Maria, Lita vs John Cena. Hell Eric Bishoff even made a intergender tag team match between Lita & Trish Stratus Vs Y2J Chris Jericho & Christain at Summer Slam.

    JV : Personnaly I'd rather the divas fight the men rather then interfere from the outside all the time. Like former female valets like Sensational Sherry or Sunny, not that there was anything wrong wiht seeing Sunny at ring side. Sable too got in volved & for memory Sable bombed her ex-husband Marc Mero out of the WWE. Lets go to our GM in is office.


    RAW GENERAL MANAGER



    ************************************* ARNOLD SCHWARAZENEGGER ********************************

    ( RAW GENERAL MANAGER )



    After much deliberation as to how we would pick the divas & superstars to contend the first ever Intergender Championships, we decided to draw from the barrel the remaining supertars & divas obviously yet to competite tonight. The winner will be simply known as the E W W F Intergender Champion.

    But since this is a first off we've decided to place the remaining roster as I said in a barrel to be hand picked by two seperate referees from each gender barrell as they shbwo the names being placed in the barrel as I explain the reasoning for this belt.


    The Divas inquired strongly why they couldn't go for the E W W F Championship, we stated on behave of the superstar that the Divas needed to prove to them that they were worthy of having a crack at the major title. So you see this belt will mean alot to the Superstars, because they will want to proveto the women don't belong in the ring with the men when it comes for the Raw championship & the divas want to prove they deserve a shot at the E W W F title in future, provided they performed consistently in the Battle of Sexes Title.

    Now to the barrels, as you saw the refs had been holding up the names of the divas & putting them in the barrel, just like the othedr ref was placing the superstars in there barrel to be draw like wise & these wrestlers are only from the Raw show. So without further udou lets get on with it. As you can see the first ref has drawn from the Divas barrel. Now for the second ref to draw from superstars barrel. So we now take you back the ring announcer to introdcue the wrestlers to the ring.



    MATCH 4 VACAUNT INTERGENDER CHAMPIONSHIP


    VS



    ********RING ANNOUNCER ******



    This match is for the E W W F INTERGENDER CHAMPIONSHIP, the male superstar in this match hailing from PARTS UNKNOWN weighing in at 315 pounds he is the red monster Kane (masked ).



    ******** THE COMMENTATORS *****

    ( JKL ) ( JV )

    must be seriously concerned for the diva who will fight the red monster who has returned to his demon ways with his mask.

    JKL : Yes I am Jesse, which one of our lovely divas is going to face the red monster.

    JV : Well we are about to find out as Kane's fire works go off as, Kane steps into the ring then he paces about the ring as if feeding time is due.

    JKL : As we go back to the ring announcer to find out who are diva will be oppossed to Kane.




    ***** RING ANNOUNCER ******



    His opponent hailing from Los Angeles California weighing in at 126 pounds she is Maryse.



    ***** THE COMMENTATORS ******

    ( JKL ) ( JV )

    aryse, although she looks hot & I love her attitude as she walks down the ramp full of energy, she msu be wondering what the hell.

    JV : Did you hear the weight difference Kane 316 & maryse 126 that's almost 200 pounds.

    JKL : I am worried about that, as Maryse on the apron does her thing before climbing between the ropes into the ring & then she snaps her head back. I love it when she does that, as Maryse takes her robe off to reveal red hot outfit with matching red thigh high boots.

    JV : Maryse does look amazing I'll grant you that Jerry, But the red monster is winding up loosening up in fact ready for a match as if his taking on Cena or Goldberg.



    ************** BELL SOUNDS TO START MATCH 4 **********





    JKL

    Kane moves in to try to land a powerful right jab, as Maryse sways it then grabs
    his second attempt to judo wrist lock twirl kane to the canavss he gets up
    immediately to rush Maryse who proves it was no fluke by performing a second
    wrist lock judo flipping kane to the canvass, as the big red monsters lands on his back.


    JV

    Kane gets up then moves about in the ring, as he tries to seize Maryse up.
    Kane lunges at Maryse as she judo suplexes Kane. Kane gets to his feet as
    Maryse immediately performs a second judo suplex on kane.
    JKL

    I thought this was going to eaily be a one sided match.

    JV

    maryse treis ot whip Kane who stands his ground that delivers a bone rattling
    clothes line chop across her chest that decks Maryse. That was a dumb move as kane
    now stomps her following up he pulls up maryse to atomic knee drop Maryse.

    JKL

    Never seen Kane do that move before. Kane pulls her up to whip her to the ropes
    on her return Maryse flap jack drop kicks Kane to his face that rocks the big red
    machine.


    JV

    Yeah but Kane doesn't go down, as Kane responds by coming at Maryse who
    ducks behind his wild clothes line attempt to standing behind him drops Kane with
    a viciously leg chop as he gets up hobbling Maryse runing tackles his leg form behind
    to second leg chop him.

    JKL

    Maryse using all her moves as a heel wrestler stomps the back of Kane thigh then
    knee 1,2,3, times as she stops to hold up his right leg the fans chant her name as she
    drops down wiht both knees into his right knee.

    JV

    Kane uses his legs to push off maryse trying to grab his leg as he kneeling lands
    a massive punch ot her midriff then form his knees her upper cuts her as she is
    dropped the ref is mad at Kane for using a closed fist.

    JKL

    Kane gets up favoring that leg as he waits for maryse to stands up he scoops up
    Maryse to feel her thrashing about then she drops down to leg chop him a third time
    in the match. Maryse grabs the lg to dangerous leg lock Kane twisting the knee in a
    90 degree angle.

    JV ; Kane uses the ropes ot break the hold, as he uses the ropes ot pull himself up maryse comes in he use shis leg whilst leaning into the roeps ot fend himself fomr her as he follows pu by leaping lunging shoulder blocking maryse.

    JKL : Kane stands up then drops to one knee not before he rights maryse coming at him ot the mdriff 1,2,3, times then eh stands pu to jumping spining side walk slam Maryse.

    JV ; I think the fun & games are over. kane stands up to pull up Maryse to scoop her hjihig into the air to back break Maryse. Kane holds onto her the powerslam pins her 1,2, she kicks out but wiht no real force.

    JKL : I'm begining to fear for what Kane has in store for thsi gorgeous diva maryse. maryse is pulled pu as Kane poweful whips her to the turn bucekl then follws it up by limbing avlaanche splash Maryse.

    JV : Maryse counters as she moves in the last possible second as kane slams chest first into the buckle that winded him no end. Maryse stesp up to unolad one, two, three fury rights no effect. All it did was infuriate the big red machine Kane.

    JKL

    It
    Certainly did, Kane blocks her fourth then choke locks her to choke slam
    Maryse to hell.

    JV

    no way Maryse prevents it by booting Kane as hard as she can to low blow.
    Kane drops to his knees in agony. Maryse in geat position does her head snap
    back, then motions to the watch this. Maryse karate volley kicks Kane to his face.

    JKL

    Maryse repeats it to with addition force. Maryse has Kaneon his knees
    as she modified French kisses him, then cover shim 1. he kicks out.

    JV

    The way Kane's sat showed he was deeply concerned with Maryse.
    Maryse from behind uses his arms to double chicken wing him .

    JKL

    Never heard Kane moan & groan in such agony. Maryse boots his face to
    see he get up full of rage & nail a massive open hand uppercut to Maryse
    that dropped her.

    JV

    It showed kae had enough he climbs to the top buckle to flying clothes line
    chop Maryse across her throat she bounced on impact into the canvass.

    JKL

    Maryse kneels then pulls herself up using the ropes. Maryse turns to face Maryse
    who running big boots Maryse, but no she last second who uses the ropes to pull down
    on them & then instantly almost sling shot action into Kane's leg to upend him.

    JV

    Who would have thought someone weighing in at 316 pounds would struggle with
    someone weighing only 126 pounds.

    JKL

    Oh no Kane's had enough he pulls himself as he advance at Maryse with his gloved
    right hand raised as Maryse karate twirls him to the canvass by that arm. Maryse then
    follows it up with a double knee drive to his face.

    JV

    I've got to hand it to Maryse I like every other wrestling fan thougth this was a hard
    challenge then David vs Golith & he used a two by four. Maryse then applies a
    Anaconda submission hold on Kane who stomps away, as Maryse has it locked
    in perfectly


    JKL

    Kane knee rams her to the baclk of her head once, twice, three times then by the
    fourth she had released him anyhow. Kane stands up to use the ropes to come off
    to running big boot her to the face side that dropped her.

    JV

    Kane pulls her up to choke hold Maryse then hoist her up in the air to deliver a bone
    crushing choke slam her with disgust. Kane pulls her up to choke slam her a second
    time this time he covers her 1..2. she kicks out.

    JKL

    Kane stands up to pull up Maryse who is vulnerable he full of rage to choke slams her
    a third time. Kane take shis time to finally pin Maryse without hooking a leg
    1...2.. & three quarters she kicks out, it's not over.

    JV

    OMG I never thought I'd see the day someone kicks out of three choke slams in a row.
    Have to admitt deeply concerned with Maryse resolve. Kane pulls her up to whip her the
    ropes, but somehow Maryse reverse whips him using his momentum he rebounds off the
    turn buckle as Maryse high over head back drops Kane.

    JKL

    Maryse quickly apples a Maryse camel clutch but he stands up to drop backwards
    planting her into the canvass. Maryse is putting up a brave performance one
    that will enhance he reputation beyond being just a diva wrestler.

    JV

    However Kane's size & strength are telling, as we watch him stand up, then pull
    Maryse upto scoop her high inyo the air to body slam her form a great height.
    Kane climbs to the top bucekl to flying missiel drop kick her to the chest, that's it.

    JKL
    Not done yet pulls her pu to set her up thrashing about to
    tombstone her to hell he covers her r.i.p pin fall 1..2..3 it's over.

    JV

    Got to hand it to the diva, sorry make that wrestler who really had Kane in
    trouble but she couldn't coup with his size in nailing big impact moves,
    eventuallly kane's strength overhelmed Maryse.

    JKL

    As the ring announcer gives us the official result.



    ****** RING ANNOUNCER *****



    The winner of the match & first ever E W W F Intergender Champion Kane.




    ***** THE COMMENTATORS *****


    JV

    Kane stares down at Maryse with the belt draped over his left shoulder as
    looks down on Maryse.

    JKL

    The refs & medical personnal telling Kane to move on

    JV

    i don't think Kane want sto do anything he is just looking on Maryse
    as if maybe concerned.



    THE END OF MATCH 4 THE WINNER KANE




    ******* THE COMMENTATORS ******



    one more match for the evening & then we are done for our first RAW show under
    the E W W F brand name.

    JV

    So far so good, looking foward to seeing the animal Bautista who'll be in this
    tag team match.

    JKL

    Lets go to our announcer for the 5th & last match.




    ************ MATCH 5 BAUTISTA & BIG SHOW VS MIZ & MASON RYAN ********************


    & VS &
    ****** RING ANNOUNCER *********


    Our last match of the evening is a tag team match featuring the first tag team of Batista & The Big Show.


    THE COMMENTATORS

    JKL

    How can Miz & Mason Ryan handle these two impressive big men.

    JV
    What batista weights 300 pounds & Big Show tips the scales at a wopping 486
    pounds that's 786 pounds & we are yet to have the ri opponents in the ring.

    JKL

    Lets go to the ring announcer for that.

    JV

    No kidding, Batista is big but Big show is almost 200 pounds heavier then Batista
    who are they fighting polar bears or something.
    Look at how Big shos just steps over
    the top rope for some they trip over getting in over the bottom rope.


    ***** RING ANOUNCER ******


    Their opponents are Miz & Mason Ryan.


    THE COMMENTATORS

    ( jkl )

    Mason Ryan has been real impressive since joining the old W W E .

    Jv

    Miz is as smart in the ring as Punk & Mason Ryan looks like a Bautista clone,
    but from my scouting I hear his got it to become champion one day.


    ********** THE RING SOUNDS TO START MATCH 5 ****************



    JV

    Well this will be interesting as Big Show steps out over the top rope to stand on
    the apron leaving Miz to battle things with Batista. Mason on the ring apron waiting to
    be tagged in. Watches Batista & Miz start things off.


    JKL

    Batista immediately goes on the war path, as he unloads massive clubbs across
    his upper back. Batista his raw popwer to whip the 1 time champion into the ropes
    on his return batista spears MIz.

    JV

    Batista tags in Big Show who choke chops MIz, who felt that, as Miz stands up he
    sways the punch from Big Show as Miz from behind somehow Skull crushers a fresh
    Big Show.

    JKL

    Miz quickly makes the cover as Big Show boots him off with ease. Miz tags in
    Mason Ryan as he attacks Big Show left & right, as Mason Ryan uses his
    strength to whip Big Show to the ropes on his return Mason Ryan displays his
    power by scope powerslamming Big Show.


    JV

    Mason Ryan is indeed impressive as he stomps away at Biog Show he tries to get
    up, as Mason Ryan off the ropes shoulder tackles Big Show who is one knee right

    JKL

    Mason Ryan gets to his feet to pull Big Show up to his feet, then he whips him to the
    ropes on his return Mason Ryan over head back drops him, as the whole ring trembles.

    JV


    No kidding ( JKL ) I thought the ring was going to buckle then give way. Mason Ryan
    scoopsBig Show then with intensity he powerful body slams him.then
    buckles then it slants to one side.


    JV

    Batista has seen enough as he spears Mason Ryan who was gloating with
    Miz. Batista pulls up Mason Ryan as the ref demands he steps outside.
    Mason Ryan tags in Miz who stomps away at Big Show.

    JKL


    Miz allows Big Show to stand he big right hands his face that almost knocks
    out Miz. Big Show groggy tries to tag in Batista but Mason Ryan is tagged in he
    quickly gets to Big Show to belly to back huge suplex slams him.

    JV

    Mason goes for the pin fall 1..2 he kicks out. Mason Ryan pulls pu Big Show to scoop
    him up to body slam him what power, he off the ropes elbow drops his face then gets to
    tag in Miz.

    JKL

    Miz & Mason Ryan double team Big Show to double belly to back suplex him. No
    Big Show double blocks ot double choke hold Miz & Mason Ryan who stomp
    away at his knees then complete the double suplex slam

    JV

    Mason Ryan steps out as Miz pulls up Big Show to set him up to skull crusher him.
    Miz goes for the pin fall as mason Ryan tangles with Batista as they end up outside
    the ring on floor.

    JKL

    Miz pin fall has the ref count 1...2..3 its' over as Mason Ryan & Batista continue to
    exchange blows until the bell sound to single the end of the match.


    JV

    h no, look out as Mason Ryan House of Pain's Batista but this time he drops
    down to Batista bomb him as Miz from behind skull crushes Batista into the steps.


    JKL

    We go to the official for the official result



    RING ANNOUNCER


    THE WINNERS OF THE MATCH

    MIZ & MASON RYAN




    THE END OF MATCH 5.





    RESULTS OF THE FIRST E W W F RAW SHOW

    MATCH 1 DEFEATED CM PUNK




    MATCH 2 DEFEATED




    MATCH 3 DEFEATED &








    MATCH 4 DEFEATED







    MATCH 5 & DEFEATED &




    THE END FOR WEEK ONE OF RAW, JOINS NEXT WEEK










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    PROMOTER VINNY McCANN ( VINCE McMAHON )

    COMMENTATORS: JESSE VENTURA & JERRY KING LAWLER : RAW

    JIM ROSS & MICHAEL COLE : SMACKDOWN

    REFERESS : WHO CARES

    GENERAL MANAGER RAW ARNOLD SCHWARAZENAGGAR

    GENERAL MANAGER SMACKDOWN SYLVERSTER STALLONE


    The new federation has been a work in progress for a while, to finally announce the GM's of both shows has the industry buzzing with ultimate excitement. Both GM's have promised to try to make their shows as great as possible. One of the new exciting features of our promotion is to allow the viewers to choose the matches for the EWWF Internet Championship belt, only one restrication applies the champion from the previous match holds the title into the new title match so you get to choose the opponent. The exciting part is because no champion is yet to be crowned the first one to come up with the match stipulation participations will be a part in who will be crowned the first ever EWWF Internet champion. No matter the stipulation or type of match, be it Hell in the Cell, Royal Rumble you choose the match & I'll do the story to the superstars or even divas you choose.

    The first show will kick off tonight when I get home from work. Raw will be the first show but will leave the viewers quessing what the card will be, but one thing is for certian all the superatrs & divas have been training the house down & they are lookng fitter & stronger then ever before. The first shwos will take place at the Pepsi Arena the tickets were sold out so quick showing if you promote your show correctly the fans will come but now we need our superstars to bring it, wiht great callers on both shows & major GM's we know we are on a winner.

    One thing we also ask is that there will be some teething problems early with EWWF like adding my own comments to my own blog, which is why I've edited this post. As for the opening Raw show tonight I hope you enjoy it & feel free to make suggestions.
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    Re: ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION

    Guys please check out my first attempt feel free to add some advice

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    Not to be rude but can you please make the font smaller?...I'm reading this on my iPhone and I can't exactly see this easily.

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    sorry about that I promise to be more careful what do you suggest size to remain at 4 rather then increase & down crease all the time.

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    Just from skimming over this I know I'm going to need to leave a big review. I've gotten on a normal computer and it's still much too big. Keep the show size at about 2, just take the whole thing and make it smaller. Some parts can be larger, such as headings, but you'll need to tone this down big time.

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    Really appreciate the feedback, I was worreid it would be too small wich is why I did the writing so big so others can read it wihtout squtting but obviously I didn't figure for iphones etc.

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    Re: ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION

    More than anything, the format needs a lot of work. The single biggest problem is the lack of organization. Just quickly glancing through your first show, I wouldn't have even guessed that you've had any matches. So before every match, make a bold line showing what the match is. For example, Miz vs Goldberg:

    Match 2 - The Miz vs. Goldberg

    Anyone who reads your BTB will easily be able to tell when a match begins. All of the different changes in size became an eye sore. It's one thing to make certain lines stand out by increasing the font, but it's another by changing it all throughout the BTB. I'm also not a fan of the writer having so many different font colors. It doesn't really bug me much when a writer only uses black (Especially if they bold certain lines), but I know a lot of writers love their colors. Colors are fine, but keep it simple. Only a few font colors and keep it the same all throughout the BTB. For example, for every match, use basic black font when describing the events. If Jesse Ventura is speaking, only give him one color instead of changing it every time he speaks. I imagine you could get away with only 3-4 font colors. Stick to font colors that are easy on the eyes on both the light and dark screen. The yellow font may look okay on a dark skin, but it's painful on the light ones. Lastly, this isn't MSN. Using "R", "U" or any other text speak just makes this BTB look unprofessional. It only takes a fraction of a second longer to type out the full word.

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    Jim's pretty much given you a golden rule for BTB - making your shows easier to read. At the moment I don't want to read your show because it looks like such a struggle to get through. Follow Jim's advice when it comes to your next show.

    BTB's such as this one whereby fantasy rosters have been created by combining WWE with TNA are incredibly hard to make successful, since I've been here the only two that spring to mind that have done well with this scenario is Mr Showtime and Greenchad, it might be a good idea to have a read of their work and see what elements of their shows people enjoyed.

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    Re: ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION

    Yea everyone has said it but just need to change up that format a little make the txt easier to read and smaller, but I wish you the best of luck with this

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    Big thank u to those who took the time & posted comments, really means a lot that you have taken the time to try to understand what I'm trying to achieve with my fantasy federation. The only role play style I've done in the past was usually me as the commentator calling the match as if I was JIM ROSS then allow my comemntatory to tell what was happening in the ring. Do u guys think I could do it in this manner or should iron out the flaws from this one & just take on board the sound advice I've recieved.

    I will certainly take heaps more care as to how I use the fonts, colors, telling the story, spelling checks & labeling matches. I can now see what you guys meant by your posts. I will continue to persevere in doing the stories no is perfect. But also I will be making damn sure I read other fellow fantasy wrestling shows to get a better understanding of how they put a show together & make sense for the reader, as has been suggested strongly to me by others who took the time to post a comment.

    I too have gone back since reading all your posts & can now see what yiou guys mean. If it's hard for me to follow then it must be extremely difficult for you & not worth the struggle to read all of it. Would it be such bad idea to go back to the start & just iron many erros I did along the way. I hope in future u guys read my stories again to see whether there an improvement.

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    Re: ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION

    Feel free to go back, edit your first post and see if you can take onboard the advice given, but do not start from stratch and create a new thread

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    Thanks Ed, I did do that after reading your posted comment. I was picked me up by it actually, because I could see why I copped the flak, I found it hard to follow too. I'd Iike to think the changes that were suggested by you & others I've taken on board & made a little improvement on them. I've given a lot of thought as to what I want to tell in my matches & parting it all together, although many things I'd like to do better I'd like to think if I stick it I'll make those improvements.

    In case your wondering the reason I haven't finsihed the Raw show is that I felt it important to fix what I started, that why others can see the chnages they've suggested I've fixed to the best of my ability. I have to admit most of the time in the past 72 hours I've spent checking, researching & studing how others put there BTB together. Making sure that my BTB is easier to follow & that they can feel what I'm trying to achieve in the story. Anymore more ideas would be great & extremely appreciated.

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    HEY GUYS PLEASE CHECK OUT MY BTB MARK 2 GONE BACK & STARTED AGAIN.

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    While the presentation is better and the show is still largely unorganized, I have to ask who is Vince McCann?

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    If you read on you'll see, I've tries to make sure that everyone knows when commentators are talking, the match starts, & ends. I've tries to keep the surprise element. Vinny McCann is really Vince McMahon who tricked Triple H out of the role as CEO, so you'll get that when Triple H & Vince at in the ring exchanging conversation.
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    ENTERTAINMENT WORLD WRESTLING FEDERATION



    THE COMMENTATORS
    MICHAEL COLE (MC) JIM ROSS ( JR)


    MC
    It's great to be here on our first, Entertainment World Wrestling Federation
    Smackdown Show.


    JR
    Yes it should be a great one (MC), as we go to our GM of Smackdown Slyvester Stallone.

    SMACKDOWN GENERAL MANAGER
    SYLVESTER STALLONE


    It's a thrill to be here, as you all know my path & wrestling pave crossed in

    ROCKY 3 The Eye of The Tiger, which had Hulk Hogan in it as Thunderlips.

    So to be here as GM, so many years after that is an amazing thrill & honour.

    As the permanent GM of Smackdown, I promise that I will be present at all

    times & my roll is to be a fair GM, whilst staying in the back ground to allow the

    wrestlers & divas to do there thing.

    I notice the GM of Raw Arnold Schwaranegger announced a intergender title
    for his show, well on our show the divas can challenge for the E W W F Smackdown
    Championship & tag team titles. But they will have to earn the right to competite in
    championship matches. I just want to say lets get on with the show & Yo Adrian I did it,
    I'm the General Manager of SMACKDOWN !.


    COMMENTATORS

    MC
    I'm looking foward to the opening match & it is a tag team match.

    JV
    It should be a beauty to, as we go to the ring for the FIRST MATCH 1


    MATCH 1


    VS








    MC
    there goes the bell Legacy take on Hart Dynasty, it's interesting that ted had
    been riding the coat tails of Cody towards the end of WWE Smackdown.

    J R
    Natalie can take care of herself too as she is on the outside barking instructions
    to her tag team.

    MC
    D B Smith & Ted Dibiase will start things off as they collar tie up to the ropes, as
    D B Smith gains the advantage using his strength to total advantage.

    JR
    The Hart Dynasty who are put of the Harte Foundation are carrying on the family
    name into our E W W F era & doing a fine job, as DB Smith scoop up Dibiase to side
    break him.

    MC
    Ted Dibiase get up to then apply a side standing healdock on the bigger man as DB
    Smith lunged at him. DB Smith counters by shoving him off to the ropes, as Dibiase uses
    the ropes to then rebound.

    JC
    DB Smith over head back drops him. DB Smith applies a head lock forcing Ted
    Dibiase to one knee form the twisting motion D B Smith applies wiht the headlock.
    Dibiase foward trips him up to get back up quickly then over head back drop D B
    Smith as he drops him from a great height.

    MC
    Ted Dibiase tags in Cody as they double team atomic knee drop one half of
    the tag team champions. Cody Rhodes stomps his knee as he tried to tag in
    Tyson Kidd standing on the bottom rope with his amr out stretched.

    JR
    Cody Rhodes quickly elbow shots Tyson Kidd off the canvass, allowing Cody &
    Ted to quickly double team whip him to the ropes & D B Smiht on his return gets
    double over head back dropped.

    MC
    Ted Dibiase steps back out as the ref ordered him to his corner, as Cody Rhodes
    scoops up D B Smiht who upend him as he trashed about then landed on top of him
    as a result this allows him to get up to tag in Tyson Kidd as they now double team fury
    punch his face to knock him down.

    JR
    Ted Dibiase yells to Cody hang in there, as Cody Rhodes recieves a fantastic drop kick
    from Tyson Kidd to the face. Tyson Kidd pulls up Cody Rhodes who delivers perfect text
    book drop kick to the face of Kidd this time then gets up quickly to use the ropes for
    momentum to running jumping drop kick his face.

    MC
    Rhodes tags in his partner Ted Dibiase as they double team belly to back double
    forward slam him to the canvass. Rhodes grabs one leg & Dibiase the other as they
    double knee smash him from either side.

    JR
    Ref tells Rhodes to step out to the apron, whilst Dibiase knee drops to the face of
    Tyson Kidd, as Natalie claps encouragement from the outside, whilst D B Smith
    double clutched fists tells Tyson Kidd to hang in there.

    MC
    Dibiase pulls up Tyson Kidd to whip him to their corner as he follows it up with a quick
    fire running knee to the midriff, as he steps back allowing Rhodes to choke him using
    the tag team string. Ref tunrs to see Rhodes motion, what I didn't do anything.

    JR
    D B Smiht needs to wait as he coming in as he did allowed Legacy to double knee
    drop Tyson Kidd then from the opposite ropes Rhodes drops kicks him ot the face &
    Dibiase to his upper back from behind.

    MC
    Dibiase & Rhodes look like the legacy of old so far tonight. As Dibiase steps out after
    tagging in Rhodes to see Rhodes stomp away as he mocks the fans then pulls up
    Tyson Kidd as her whips to the ropes but Tyson Kidd spring board fornt kicks his face to
    counter anything Rhodes had planned.

    JR
    It's so important for Tyson Kidd, however Dibiase drags him by his legs away from
    his partner then stomps im until Rhodes joins in as he was mocking D B Smith. Dibiase
    pulls him, as Rhodes restrains Tyson Kidd by his arms then Dibiase off the ropes
    running froearm smashes Rhodes to the face as Tyson ducked.

    MC
    Tyson uses gets to his feet as Dibiase off the ropes drop kicks Rhodes to the face as
    Tyson Kidd dropped to the canvass to avoid the blow as Dibiase gets up apologising
    to his partner as Tyson Kidd tags in D B Smith who watches them shoving each other.

    JR
    Use the opportunity to running double clothes line them to the canavss as he pulls them
    up to double head ram them meeting of the minds. D B Smiht has just made things worse,
    for Dibiase & Rhodes.

    MC
    Rhodes gets up as he decks Dibiase with his cross roads finisher. Dibiase lying on his
    back as his partner Rhodes him he I'm done with you. Hart Dynasty seize the moment to
    set him up to Hart Attack Dibiase as Kidd covers him 1,2,3, it's over the winners of the
    match & still E W W F TAG TEAM CHAMPIONS HART DYNASTY.

    JR
    We'll I did wonder whether these two could capture their former glories.

    MC
    I knew 100% this would happen, as Dibiase wanted to ride the coat tails of
    Rhodes who showed ot the world he is done for good with his former partner.

    JR
    Meanwhile the Hart Dynasty are celebrating their victory with the fans, as we go
    for the official announcement from our ring announcer.

    RING ANNOUNCER

    THE WINNERS OF THE MATCH & STILL

    E W W F TAG TEAM CHAMPIONS

    HART DYNASTY





    THE END OF MATCH 1


    COMMERCIAL BREAK



    RANDY ORTON in the ring.

    So somehow Sheamus walks into this federation as the new E W W F
    Smackdown Champion, I need you to come down this ramp, because I have
    something to say to you.

    CHRISTIAN comes to the ring

    Randy, Randy, Randy nothing has changed, the company name may be
    different, yet here we are were we left off at W W E SMACKDOWN.

    RANDY ORTON

    What do you want Christian, last time we met I beat you after I lost my
    title to you in a disqualification title match when you spat in my face.
    So since I beat you on the last show of Smackdown, under the W W E
    banner, only fitting I get first crack at Sheamus.

    CHRISTIAN

    You must have got one to many head shots in our last match, because
    your speaking like someone who is concussed. I should know I was the one
    who dished it out to you.

    RANDY ORTON

    Funny Christian but we both know I'm the better man. Your the one that is
    talking stupid, this is my time & it's my first crack at Sheamus.

    SHEAMUS
    ( With that, Sheams made his way to the ring).

    What are you two arguing about, what makes you think either of you deserve
    a shot at this title. Take a good look at it, because neither of you deserve a title shot.
    Here I'll even show it above my head so you two can see it clearly.

    RANDY ORTON

    What makes you say that.

    SHEAMUS

    Listen here fella... I'm the champion & I call the shots around here.
    You both heard our new Smackdown General Manager. Any one can
    challenge me. Hell I might even allow one of the divas to have a shot at
    my title & be in the ring with a real man.

    CHRISTIAN

    Real funny Sheamus, you must suffer from the same concussion as Randy Orton.
    You better stop looking at me in that Orn or I'll slap your face silly. You serious that
    a diva deserves a title shot ahead of us.

    ( WITH THAT THEY BOTH ATTACK SHEAMUS & THEN EACH OTHER ).



    ( SLYVESTER STALLONE COMES TO THE RING URGENTLY )

    Enough, enough already, stop it all three of you, RIGHT NOW!!!. This is wrestling
    this no mugging. I have a solution that is fair to all three of you. Orton you take on
    Christian & the winner will take on Shaemus on next week's Smackdown show.
    Sheamus before he walk off, you don't get off lightly, you will have a match later
    tonight & it's against Edge & Sheamus your match is up next.

    ( All three remain in the ring as the new General Manager heads back to his office.
    They eventually all depart with glances only )




    MATCH 2
    SHEAMUS VS EDGE




    COMMENTATORS


    JR
    Well i think that's a fair & just call by our new General manager.

    MC
    That's a rubbish call, Christian should be wrestling Sheamus & Orton
    should wait his turn.

    JR
    How can yopu say that ( MC ), Orton won their last meeting so naturally he
    deserved first crack, but this is also a good situation for both.


    THERE GOES THE BELL TO START THE MATCH




    MC
    Edge & Sheamus lock up as Edge & Sheamus go toe to toe from the outset
    exchanging quick wild fire left & rights to each other.

    JR
    Sheamus tries to roundhouse right Edge but he stomps at his midriff with lifting
    shots, then Edge whips Sheamus but no he blocks it to powerful clothes line
    ram his face to knock him down.

    MC
    Edge gets up to colalr tie up Sheamsu as they end up on the ropers as Edge
    knife edge chops Shemasu then smirks at him in typical Edge style.

    JR
    Edge belly to belly suplex Sheamus, his strenght shouldn't be under estimated
    by Sheamus, as Edge belly to bakc but Sheamus big elbow his face then a second
    then use the ropes ot runing ram Edge still holding Sheamus throat first inot the top
    ropes that shook Edge up.

    MC
    Sheamus clubbs Edge 1,2,3,4,5, times then raise his arm the air as if he has won
    the match. Sheamus pulls him up to belly to back high angle suplex Edge.

    JR
    The celtic warrior pull Edge up to his feet again & now whips Edge to the ropes on
    his return Sheamus is in position to huge over head back drop Edge but he lands on
    his feet back to back to Sheamus & then neck breaks him out of no where.

    MC
    I have no idea how Edge did that & by the look on Edge who motions to the fans he
    has no idea either, however he grasb Sheamus to pull him to his feet to Russian leg
    sweep him to the canvass.

    JR
    Edge using his speed to advantage as he throws 1,2,3,,4 punches with open fist
    that Sheamus.

    MC
    Edge setting a fast pace in the match up uses the ropes to come off but Sheamus
    gets Edge & twirl back breaks him great levelier applied by the Celtic warrior Sheamus.

    JR
    Sheamus who has been impressive since his first match stomps away on Edge now
    taking advantage of that counter move. Sheamus then pulls Edge up to right his feet to
    right hand punch his forehead then chin knocking Edge to the canvass as Sheamus
    wrings his hand from the blows.

    MC
    That shot rattled Edge as Sheamus scoops him up to powerful body slam Edge
    Sheamus then goes for the elbow drop to Edge but lands on the canvass & misses
    Edge who rolle doput of the way. Edge quickly to his feet uses the ropes to come
    off the ropes spears Sheamus who instead has countered it by amazingly scope
    powerslam pin Edge.

    JR
    The ref in for the count 1...2, but Edge kicks out easily. Sheamus uses the hair to pull
    up Edge as the ref warns him but Sheamus ignores the ref whist he delivers big knee
    rams Edge's to the chest then midriff whilst he was wide open.

    MC
    Sheamus on top in the match now then whips Edge to the turnbuckle as Edge slams into
    it hard & then drops to his kness he felt that jarring senseation throughout his whole body.

    JR
    Sheamus wasting time pounds his chest gloating, smirking, as he makes his way
    towards Edge. Sheamus picks Edge up then he rams him backwards into the turnbuckle
    to then shoulder ram Ege in the corner 1,2,3,4, then break as the ref was getting angry.

    MC
    Sheamus was smart to break the move before the 5 count. Sheamus then whips
    Edge to the opposite tunbuckle, as Sheamsu charges Edge..

    JR
    Sheamus running shoulder rams the turnbuckle as Edge used the ropes to pull
    himself out of harms way. Edge reeling from Sheamus body blows begins to stomps
    away at the champion whilst trying to regroup at the same time.

    MC
    Come on ref why don't you get Edge away from Sheamsu stomping him in the corner.

    JR
    Sheamus rakes the eyes of edge to break Edge momentum, then Sheamus
    scoops him up to body slam the 10 time heavyweight champion. Sheamus comes
    for Edge who gets to his feet he German suplex releases Edge who was groggy.

    MC
    The Celtic Warrior is now right on top in this match, as he pulls Edge up to his
    feet, then the champion whips him no Edge reverse whips the E W W F Smackdown
    champion to the ropes on on his return Edge huge over head back drops him, as
    he lands with a major thud on the canvass after landing on his back.

    JR
    Edge looking at the fans as he grabs his hair then makes like he is going crazy as
    he spears Sheamus, but the impact sent Sheamus near the ropes & almost under
    the bottom rope to the floor outside.

    MC
    Edge follows up but Sheamus gets up using the ropes to snake eyes Edge nailing
    his throat into the top rope as Sheamus lands on the canvass on his knees sucking
    in the big ones.

    JR
    Sheamus takes his time following up, as Edge gets up to off the ropes
    reverse elbow Sheamus even though Sheamus land the last blow. Edge kips up
    his feet as the fans roar then he spears Sheamus but he counters to wild clothes
    line take down Edge. Sheamus gets up but Edge stomps his mdriff then he
    impalers the champion in the non title fight who didn't expect that.

    MC
    Edge starting to get his second wind, as he off the ropes sholulder blocks the
    champion, then whilst the champion is on one knee Edge drop kicks his chest to
    get up, as Sheamus gets to his feet wobbly as then Edge spears Sheamus as he
    stood in the corner but he moved out of the way as Edge spears the turnbuckle he
    wasn't able to pull up in time.

    JR
    Oh my, Shemaus rams Edge's right shoulder into the turnbuckle pad. Then Sheamus
    uses the turnbuckle to shove Edge into the turnbuckle as he rebounds suplexes
    Edge using the turnbuckle to great effect.

    MC
    Sheamus stands up taunting Edge then the fans, then Edge again, but he gave
    him too much time to regroup as Edge on one knee lashes out at Sheamus with
    rights to his midriff 1,2,3,4,5 then he stands up. Edge off the ropes spear take
    down Sheamus who counters to this time swoop him Edge up to Celtic cross
    power bomb him form a great height.

    JR
    I didn't reliese how strong Sheamus was until tonight. Sheamus gloating he has
    Edge under control drops to cover him 1..2. he kicks out. Sheamus sits him up so
    he cops a right from him, however Edge thenthrows a rigth then another & another
    whilst getting to his feet.

    MC
    Edge blocks Sheamus punches as Sheamus blocks Edge's punches which is really
    tiring both of them out. Sheamus gets to his feet then Edge unexpected spinning
    back heel kicks Sheamus knocking him down to the canavss as they are both down.

    JR
    This has been a geat match so many twists & turns & now I'm finding it difficult to
    try it pick who'll win the match.

    MC
    Edge climbs to the top buckle to flying spear the champion Sheamus however
    he moved out f the move & instead Edge ends up spearing the ref as he
    drives him inot the cnaavss wiht that spear move from the top turnbuckle that
    may have fnished off Sheamus if he connected on him.

    JR
    Edge gets up as the fans rally for him, as does Sheamsu they deliver huge bombs
    on each other whilst the ref lies motionless on the canvass. Edge charging
    shoulder rams Sheamus to the face as he got to one knee from the previous
    move he gets up to spear tackle Edge but as he speared Sheamus he was
    able to some what counter & ddt Edge with his own spear so they both
    copped the worst of that move .

    ( Candice Michelle comes down the ramp the ramp )

    MC
    What business does Candice Michelle have being down at ring side, she
    isn't associated with either wrestler, get her out of here ref, but his still
    out as Edge spears Sheamus distracted by the gorgeous Candice
    a second time.

    JR
    The ref is pulled by the arm to come into position to make the count Edge
    covers Sheamsu then motions to the ref come on make the 3 count, but no
    point as the ref is still out of it. Edge stands up as Sheamsu jawbreakers him.

    MC
    What a champion Sheamus is, even though this is a non title fight he is showing
    his true character as a fighting champion.

    JR
    Edge climbs to the top buckle but Sheamus lunges at the ropes to make him
    land on his you know what. Sheamus stands on the midldle buckle to super
    suplex him to the canavss, but Candice Michelle of the ropes splashes down
    on Sheamus who was reeling form delivering that power house move.

    MC
    What the hell, why did Candice have to do that, Candice Michelle pulls up
    Sheamus still groggy then she delivers her finisher the killswitch aka candlicious
    on Sheamus the champion.

    JR
    Edge meanwhile stands up to pull up the champion to impaler him
    as Candice Michelle does her bit to make the ref come around he does
    she drops out as quickly as she can leaving the ref to count slowly1.............2...............3
    it's over

    MC
    You must be joking that woman had no business in the ring as the ref makes a
    count that shouldn't have been allowed.

    JR
    Yeah but Sheamus shoulders were pinned to the canvass as Edge made the
    cover resulting in him getting the 1...2...3 the fans rejoice, whilst Candice Michelle
    on the outside does her trademark Candice twirl then she heads back to the locker
    room drssed in that sexy outfit.

    MC
    Why the hell did Candice need to stick her nose in this match

    JR
    Shut up ( MC) , we go to the ring annoucer for the official result.

    RING ANNOUNCER

    The winner of the match EDGE



    THE END OF MATCH 2



    COMMERCIAL BREAK


    Interviewer
    Welcome at this time Kelly Kelly.

    Kelly
    Thanks Josh

    Interviewer
    You are creating history tonight by being the first diva to fight for the U S Title

    Kelly
    I expect Jack Swagger to be a worthy opponent but I will make him beg for mercy

    Interviewer
    There you have it straight from Kelly Kelly as we go to the match.




    MATCH 3 VS


    First the challenger making her way to the ring is Kelly kelly, she walks to the
    ring as the fans erupt but they too must be conerned for her welfare in this match.
    kelly Klely climbs in & does her thiing to get the crowd in a frenzy.


    Now the All American American American & U S Champion Jakc Swagger,
    he comes down the ramp smilikng then smirking then staring her down as he climb
    in the ring with the belt around his waist he take sit off then hands it over to the referee.




    There goes the bell to sart the match



    COMMENTATORS

    MC
    There is no chance Kelly Kelly will win tonight.

    JR
    Will see, as Kelly Kelly looks awesome as she collar ties up with the
    U S Champion who whips her easily to the ropes, she uses them to
    on her return helicopter scissors kick his face that knocks him down.

    MC
    Swagger smartly uses the outside like a quaterback would use the side
    lines to avoid any follows up form Kelly kelly, as he mocks the fans by
    ringside.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly very confident early on as she uses the ropes to double front
    kick him to the back of his head as he was taunting the fans at ring side.

    MC
    Why would she do that, it's very dumb to get the U S Champoin in a foul mood.

    JR
    She wanted to get his attention. Kelly Kelly drop kicks the champion who jumped
    onto the apron as Kelly Kelly double front kicks his knees to drop him onto his knees.

    MC
    Kelly Kelly drop kicks his chest as she waited for him to stand up on the apron
    as he holds fro dear life onto the ropes prevenitng him from landing on the floor outside.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly allows the champon back in.

    MC
    You serious ( JR ) Jack Swagger is a champion hew doesn't need anyone to
    let him back in he'll get in when his good & ready as he hip tosses Kelly Kelly
    trying to attack him with forearm shot.

    JC
    Swagger using his skills belly ot belly over heads the challenger to change the
    flow of the match, as he waits to German sulpex release Kelly Kelly who lands
    on her back.

    MC
    swagger waits as she whips Kelly Kelly to the ropes on her return she drops just in
    front of Swagger does the cheerleader split & karate open hand palms his midriff
    with suffficent force to upend the champion with the momentum she had.

    JC
    Kelly Kelly drapes the champion throat on the middle rope then she stands up to force
    him to choke on them by standing on his back then she leg split dorp down on him so
    as to make him nail his throat into the middle rope.

    MC
    Kelly Kelly pulls him up as he snapmares Kelly Kelly then stands pu to of the ropes
    drop kick her to her upper back whilst sitting up from the snap mare. Now Jack
    Swagger applies a side on chin lock.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly stands up to Russian leg sweep her way out of it of Swagger's chin lock.
    Kelly Kelly is first ot her feet quickly as she stands over him to to volley kick his
    chest as he sat up then his upper back that hurt even more.

    MC
    Swagger gets up as he looks mad at Kelly Kelly as he tries to lock up to Kelly Kelly,
    who is in position to judo toss him to the canavss. Kelly Kelly gets up to meet
    Swagger with a full blown double drop kick to his face as he got up mad.

    JR
    I'm impressed with Kelly Kelly so far, she has refused to back down one bit as
    she lady like jaw breakers Swagger who had her by her hair front on.

    Mc
    Come on Swagger your emberassing yourself, get back in this match as Kelly Kelly
    holds up his right leg to drop down on it that must have hurt. Kelly Kely holds the right
    leg up as swagger lies on is back she stretches the hamstring area.

    JV
    Did i just see that delicate flower do that to a super stars wrestler. OMG she double
    knee drops down on his right knee that hurt the champion as he is screaming in agony.
    Kelly Kelly pulls him up tp place him on her shoulders to areoplane spin him around &
    around then relase him.

    MC
    Swagger stagger about she applies abdominal stretch on the champion. Kelly Kelly
    back stabbers him but he resists & powerful hip tosses her off him as he drop kicks her
    chest what a impressive move that was ( JR ).

    JR
    Kelly Kelly gets up as Jack Swagger from behind double underrhook suplex her as
    he gets up to quick snap suplex Kelly Kelly no she blocks it, as she blocks it a
    second time, then a third time to spin out of the hold to karate volley kick his face
    flush on the chin.

    MC
    Kelly Kelly follows up but Jack Swagger cross body takes down Kelly Kelly. Jack
    Swagger belly to back atomic knee drops her. no she counters to nack flip out of it &
    reverse DDT take down the champion.

    JR
    You prepared to admitt now thnis amtch is in the balance. Kelly Kelly is bringing it
    as she karate orinetal tosses him to the canvass.

    MC
    I never knew Kelly Kelly knew judo, karate for goodness shakes.

    JR
    Neither did Jack Sweagger by his expression as she complete shots Swagger
    trying to belly to belly Kelly Kelly to the change the course of this match.

    MC
    You can't be serious as Kelly Kelly goes for a quick cover but just as quickly the
    count only reaches 1.. as he kicks out easily but extremely wondered now.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly allows Swagger up to off the top buckle he catches her mid air to back
    break, as he stands up to snap mare Kelly Kelly by her hair once, twice then three times.

    MC
    You see ( JR ) only a matter of time until Swagger got the upper hand in this match
    as he scoops her up to body slam her to the canvass, then Swagger quickly grabs
    her leg to ankle lock her but she is quick enough to go for the ropes.

    JR
    omg Jack Swagger has snapped he refuses to let go as Kelly Kelly grabbed the leg
    as the ref gets in his face demading he breaks.

    MC
    Why doesn't he just apply the count, there you go 1....2...3.. she stands to fight the
    pain he refuse to let her go as Kelly Kelly begs the ref don't end this match she
    double back kicks him off as the ref counted to 4 to release the hold.

    JR
    Some champion trying to snap a diva's ankle.


    MC
    Well what the hell is she doing in their in the first place. Jack Swagger pulls her up to
    whip her to the ropes on her return off the ropes Kelly Kelly springboard drop kicks
    his chest that drops him like a bad habit.

    JV
    Kelly Kelly stands up limbing to duck under his wild forearm as she from beind trips
    him up to knee smash his right knee into the camvass. Kelly Kelly off the ropes back
    thigh drops his head. Kelly Kelly stands up full of life to use the ropes to return to
    head scissor toss the U S Champion Jack Swagger into the turnbuckle.

    MC
    Kelly Kelly bronco buster Swagger wildly then she gets up to do a Jeff Hardy double
    front kick using the turnbuckle to great effect to his face. I demand she is drag tested
    now, let alone after this match.

    JR
    Calm down ( MC ) you said this was easy pickings for Jack Swagger.

    MC
    But she is cheating as the ref lets her get away with way too much. No way Kelly
    Kelly coast coast drop kicks his face like Shane McMahon use to.

    JR
    Listen to the fans they have gone off their heads they can't believe what they are seeing.
    Could she be doing this on natural instinct. Kelly Kelly climbs to the top buckle
    as Swagger cops a Houston leg drop across his thorat ot make the pin 1...2.
    he kicks out the champion that he is.

    MC
    Jack swagger needs to fight back. Swagger gets to his feet as Kelly Kelly uses
    the ropes to get a huge big boot to her chest as she tried to spear tackle Swagger.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly was hurt, the fans are rallying her even though they are deeply
    concerned for her now.

    MC
    You can say that again as Jack Swagger Olympic slams Kelly Kelly
    to takes his time.

    JR
    the fans are booing Swaggedr because he is mocking Kurt Angle a
    former favourite. Swagger goes for the kill by applying a standing ankle
    lock to the challenger a worthy challenger Kelly Kelly.

    MC
    I will admit Kelly Kelly has been brave but it owuld be stupid to risk damage
    by not tapping to the champion.

    JR
    I must admit I agree with you she is in agony, as Jack Swagger has Kelly
    Kelly gone for all money in the middle of the ring.

    MC
    Ha, what did I say ( JR ) told you , but what the hell no way she countered
    it to foward summersalt roll out if it to apply a crippler cross face on Swagger
    by slamming his face into the canvass first once, twice, three.. seven times all up.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly has him in a crippler cross face you must be joking no way, she
    promised the world in the pre-match she would make Swagger beg & he is.

    MC
    I thought I would never see the day that a diva would make a superstar tap out.
    But she has him he is fading fast.

    JR
    Kelly kelly release him, as Swagger made it to the ropes, Kelly Kelly gets up
    to follow up as quickly as she can. Swagger gets up dripping in sweat as he
    blocks her kick.

    MC
    It's over make the call ref 1..2 she kicks out. What the hell no way.

    JR
    Swagger is devastated she kicks out he pulls her up violently then whips
    her to the ropes she returns to K2 the champion, as she rolls him over to cover
    him 1...2 he kicks out by placing a footon the bottom rope.

    MC
    what a champion, a fighiting champion, he is proving it again.

    JR
    Kelly Kelly gets up to duck under his swing to K2 him a second time, is it
    over this time as the ref makes the count 1...2 he kicks out.

    MC
    What a match as Swagger gets up using the ropes to stagger into the path of a
    kelly Kelly trouble in paradise she has been practising this move to perfection as
    she covers him with a arm draped on him as rests her exhausted face on his
    chest side on the ref counts 1..2..3 it's over., it's over, history in the making.

    JR
    You called it ( MC ) it is history in the making as Kelly Kelly has proved you
    wrong 100% in the biggest way possible, she is utterly exhausted.

    MC
    ( JR ) Kelly Kelly deserves to be the champion, as much as it hurts me to say it
    she took it all from the former champion as we go the ring announcer for the
    official result.


    RING ANNOUNCER

    The winner of the match & new US CHAMPION KELLY KELLY







    The crowd erupted as Kelly Kelly made her way back to the locker room whilst showing
    off her belt after taking in the standing ovation from the fans .



    THE END OF MATCH 3



    MATCH 4
    & VS &

    The next match will be a tag match as Wade Barrett comes to the ring first,
    climbs in as he looks confident of victory because of who his tag team partner is
    & that's the returning Brock Lesnar as he makes his way to the ring whilst eye
    balling the fans. Brock Lesnar climibs as his partner is delighted to see him.

    They await their oppoents as first coming to the ring is a former 3 time heavyweight
    champion Rey Mysterio who is full of energy as they stare down Rey who doesn't
    back down from anyone. Now the sound of shattering glass as that can only mean
    one thing Stone Cold Steve Austin is back.

    THE BELL SOUNDS



    COMMENTATORS


    JR
    The rattle snake is back (MC ) & business is about to pick up.

    MC
    Calm down (JR) we know his back, don't blow a vessel in your brain,
    actually on second though hey knock yourselve out (JR)

    JR
    Stone Cold & Lesnar start things off, as they circle about then go at it toe for
    toe as they unload huge blow on each other back & forward they unload until they
    grapple & end up on the ropes the ref demands they break cleanly.

    MC
    Lesnar & Austin lock up as Lesnar whips him to the ropes on his return Austin
    Lou Therez takes down but wait Barett attacks Mysterioas he unloads wild
    blows on him.

    JR
    Lesnar is stunned by Austin then gets up as Lesnar spring to life, omg I've never
    seen anyone take a stunner.

    MC
    Lesnar F 5's Austin as he he covers him, the ref counts 1..2 Austin kicks out
    but he is in serious trouble.

    JR
    Wade Barrett tags in to pull up Austin to use his finisher to wipe out Stone
    Cold then he goes for a quick cover the ref counts 1..2 he kicks out, the crowd
    is reliefed.

    MC
    Meanwhile on the outside Brock Lesnar was body slamming Mysterio as he pulls
    him up to place him on his shoulders then he proceeds to F'5's Mysterio left knee
    on the outside into the ring post then watch Mysterio scream in agony clutching
    that surgically repaired knee.

    JR
    my god the impact of that F5 to Mysterio on the outside as he tags Barrett to
    climb to double team stomp awat Austin as the fans chant for Austin to rally.
    No doubt he does as he tries ot fight off two men at once but the ones take over.

    MC
    Lesnar pulls up Austin to full nelson slam him to the canvass then cover him
    1..2 he kicks out.

    JR
    on the outside Barrett thunders a right punch to the back of Mysterio's leg as he
    tried to get pu onto the apron, then he yanks him off to fling him by the hurt leg
    to the fllor outside where he knee smashes him inot the mat wiht little give underneath.

    MC
    ( JR ) do you hear the impact of that. Meanwhile Ausint fights toe to toe with
    Lesnar as they exchange battle cry left & rights as Lesnar tries to hoist Austin up
    onto his shoulders, but Ausnt clubbs away at his upper back.

    JR
    Ausitn stomps Lesnar to huge stunner him did you see Lesnar tumble head over
    heels as he ends up in the corner upside down as his legs rest on the ropes.

    MC
    Austin cover him the ref couts as Barrett makes the save after 1 count.

    JR Ausitn gets up as Barrett let then rights Stone Cold as Lesnar slowly gets
    to his apply a transmission lock as he body scissors Austin to the mat he has
    put many men away with this move on U F C.

    MC
    not wrong ( JR ) look at Barrett wipe out Mysterio on the floor outside he is hurt Rey
    Mysterio.

    JR
    Barrett tags in as he helps Lesnar whip Stone cold Steve Austin to the ropes
    on is return he double clothes lines them as they did likewise to him.

    MC
    Austin looks to his corner as he sees Mysterio somehow make his way to the
    apron as he tags his partner Austin. But Mysterio limps into action as he on
    one leg tries to whip Barrett who reverse whips Mysterio who returns from the
    ropes to double front kick his face that sends Barrett to the ropes

    JR
    Wade Barrett springs off the ropes due to momentum as Mysterio flying
    through the air back leg takes down Barrett.

    MC
    Lesnar & Austin brawl on the outside as Austin manages to knife edge chop
    away at the ropes as Lesnar out of no where hoists him up to F 5 him.

    JR
    Barrett in the ring hurricanary tosses to the ropes as Mysterio off the ropes
    as the ref checks on Austin who gets on fomr the F 5 as Lesnar smashes
    a chair into the knee of Mysterio.

    MC
    Awesome stuff Lesnar, as Barrett hoists up Mysterio to wipe out him then make
    the cover 1..2..3 its' all over as Lesnar omg spine buster slams Austin through
    the annnounce table now.

    JR
    they cheated to win ( MC ) they robbed Mysterio & Austin of a victory.

    MC
    Yeah but it was fine for Candice Michelle to interferre when she did
    her finisher on Sheamus allowing Edge to win you cheered for that.
    The ring announcer makes it official


    RING ANNOUNCER

    The winners of the match WADE BARRETT & BROCK LESNAR


    &


    JR
    Why did Wade Barrett hand Lesnar a t-shirt.

    MC
    Omg it's a Nexus shirt, Wade Barrett is re-forming the band with new
    band members he has Brock Lesnar on his side

    JR
    Omg the smackdown locker room has been placed on notice. But you
    can bet my Oklahama ass that Stone Cold Steve Austin will strike back

    THE END OF MATCH 4








    MATCH 5
    VS
    The next is a diva match from Denver Colorado standing in at 5'8 & weighing
    131 pounds EVE TORRES comes to the ring first she always gets the fans
    going as she makes her way to the ring the fans stand & applaud her, she climb
    in full of energy as she strutts about full of confidence.

    Her opponent from Houston, Texas standing in at 5'10 & weighing
    127 pounds Michelle McCool, she make sher way to the ring always full of
    confidence & with a look of resilence that defies her carry on in the ring, the
    fans give her a mixed response.





    THE BELL SOUNDS



    COMMENTATORS


    MC
    Here we go, as Eve immediately locks up to Michelle McCool. They grapple
    until Michelle arm locks her opponenty then taunts her she counters to hammer
    lock out of the arm lock.

    JR
    Eve & Michelle end up in the ropes, they break cleanly. Eve cops a huge
    forearm elbow from Michelle McCool who quickly whips her to the ropes on
    her return Eve cops a huge side on to her throat.

    MC
    Eve gets up as Michelle McCool scoops her up to body slam her to the canvass.
    Michelle McCool pulls Eve up who stomps away at Michelle McCool, as she
    snap mares her. Eve chin locks Michelle McCool who stands up to jawbreaker
    Eve.

    JR
    MIchelle off the ropes hihg bakc leg drops Eve across the chest. Eve is covered
    1.. she kicks out. Michelle McCool tells the ref to count quicker. Michelle allows
    Eve to stand up then by the hair tosses her to the canvass with a snap mare.

    MC
    I like Michelle McCool she can be ruthless when required & is prepared to do what
    ever it takes to win. Michelle McCool stomps away at Eve then pulls her up by the
    hair whilst the ref tells her off.

    JR
    Michelle McCool whips Eve to the ropes she returns to helicopter head scissor
    toss Michelle to the canvass who wasn't expecting that from Eve.

    MC
    Eve pulls Michelle up to whip her to the ropes on her return Eve cops a high knee
    to her face, as Michelle swinging neck breaks Eve. Michelle McCool gets to her
    feet as she boot rakes her face.

    JR
    Michelle McCool gets Eve up to whip her to the ropes as Eve shoulder charges
    Michelle to upend her. Eve climbs to the top buckle to flying missile drop kick
    Michelle McCool to her face making her fall backwards to the canvass.

    MC
    Eve goes for a quick pin fall 1...2.. a quarter. Eve gtes up to pull up Michelle then
    whip her to the ropes on her return she cops a huge clothes line. Eve back leg drops
    her to the face.

    JR
    Eve covers Michelle 1...2 Michelle kicks out. Eve pulls Michelle up by her hair to her
    feet to whip her to the ropes & follows up to running clothes line ram Michelle McCool
    in the corner.

    MC
    Michelle McCool avoid it, then she quickly grabs Eve who is winded to quickly spinning
    belly to belly suplex toss her across the ring.Michelle McCool gets up to pull up Eve
    to follw up to Eve wiht a running knee to her face kneeling.

    JR
    Michelle McCool quickly pulls up Eve who blocks her suplex to then Enziguri kick her face.
    What a great desperation move by Eve. Eve quickly grabs Michelle McCool to croiss body standing head lock her then running bulldog her face first to the canvass.

    MC
    Eve covers Michelle 1..2 as Michelle McCool kicks out. Eve needs to stay focused but
    Michelle McCool sweeping kicks her to the back of her head then Michelle McCool back
    to back with Eve she neck breaks her.

    JR
    Eve is pinned 1..2 she kicks out. Michelle McCool stands to off the ropes running
    corkscrew neckbreakers. Eve gets up as Michelle MicCool waited to running massive
    big boot Eve to the face.

    MC
    Michelle pulls up Eve in huge trouble who escape out of her grasp to at high speed
    swinging neck break Michelle wiht her finsiher she covers her 1...2...3 it's over

    JR
    What a great win by Eve as we go to the ring announcer fore official result



    RING ANNOUNCER

    THE WINNER OF THE MATCH





    THE END OF MATCH 5




    COMMERCIAL BREAK


    MATCH 6

    MAIN EVENT

    NUMBER 1 CONTENDERS MATCH

    VS

    Making his way out to the ring first from Knoxville, Tennessee standing in at 6ft 4
    inches & weighing in at 245 pounds & 8 times former champion Randy Orton.


    His opponent from Ontario, Canada standing in at 6ft' 2 inches & weighing in at
    227 pounds & 6 times former champion Christian.




    THE BELL SOUNDS

    COMMENTATORS

    JR
    Randy Orton locks up with Christian as Orton gives him a European uppercut from
    the outset. Christian was slightly rocked by the blow hwoever he quickly eye gauges
    Randy Orton to the boos of the fans as if Christian cares.

    MC
    Rightly so, what have the fans ever done for Christian. Christian follows up his eye
    gauge by vicously clubbing away Orton to his upper back. Christian then belly to
    back atomic knee drops Orton.

    JR
    Orton is still standing but groggy as Christian running bulldog takes down Orton then
    Christian gets up to exchange burbs with the fans. Christian returns to focus on Orton
    to knee smash his right knee into the canvass.

    MC
    Christian is great he doesn't care what the fans think of him he teases them whilst
    getting on with the job at hand. Christian stomps his right leg to knee smash the knee
    again.

    JR
    Christian pulls up Orton to whip Orton to the ropes but he quickly counters by holding
    onto Christians arm to powerful European uppercut him with vemon. Orton then drop
    kicks Christian to his face.

    MC
    I can't understand these fans, Orton is as dirty as Christian if not more, yet they boo
    Christian. Orton waits for Christian to get up slightly groggy to modified neck break
    him, as he tried to wild swing Orton. Orton gets to his feet very quickly to trademark
    nee drops his face as Christian whole body shook from the impact.

    JR
    Orton has evolved since his days with evolution, as Orton has learned so much he
    now puts into practise. Orton pulls Christian up to his feet but Christian smartly
    counters anything Orton had in mind by toe hold drop down Orton with force face first
    into the canvass

    MC
    Christian waits for Orotn to sit up then he drop kicks Orton to the face. Christian
    quickly clamps a arm lock on Orton whilst he was face down reeling from the drop kick.

    JR
    This ius a smart wear down hold as it allowsd Christian time to regroup whilst working on
    Orton's arm. Christian mocks & taunts the fans as he is sitting on Orton to prevent
    him countering. However Orton reaches the ropes forcing Christian to break the hold
    reluctantly.

    MC
    Christian allows Orton to get to his feet as Orton drop kicks Christian trying to move in for
    behind but Orton turned 180 to deliver that great textbook drop kick to Christian's face.

    JR
    Orton gets to his feet to duck under Christian clothes line attempt to quickly grab
    Christian to modified neck break him.

    MC
    Orton gets to his feet as Christian gets to his feet then lunges at Orton who quick
    snap powerslam pinned him as Orton covers Christian 1... as he easily kicks out.

    JR
    Orton eyes show he is getting in the mood as the tempo of the match has lifted
    dramatically. Christian gets to his feet as Orton is in position. Got to hand it to
    Christian he sensed the momentum Orton was building & bails outside to regroup
    very cleverly before Orton could deliver his RKO.

    MC
    Orton however has other idea as he goes for Christian chasing him around the ring
    on the outside.Christian slides in then Orton pretended to follow instead he lept to his
    feet on the apron to use the ropes to drop down nail Christian's throat into the ropes as
    Christian lands on the canvass & Orton drops down to his feet n the floor outside

    . JR
    Orton is a very clever calculating wrestler as slides back under the bottom rope to rise
    to his feet as he begins to stomp stomps away on Christian.

    MC
    Orton is dirty look at him he stomps Christians' right arm, then his waist on the right side,
    then Orton stomps his right leg & finally then his right ankle. Orton looks to the fans for
    approvalthey chant his name the idiots. .

    JR
    Looks like Orton wants to take a body part home with him, as Orton begins to vindictively
    stomp away on Christian's left ankle, then left calf, then left waist & finally his face with is
    back to the main camera.

    MC
    See ( JR ) Randy Orton is dirty too. Orton sits Christian up moaning as he holds his right
    arm in the air to single he will & does begin to clubb him across the chest 1,2,3,4,5,6
    times. Orton then stands up to wait for Christian to stand up to move in quickly on him to
    ddt Christian with interest that hurt Christian.

    JR
    Orton goes for he pin fall 1..2 as Christian kicks out. Orton gets to his feet to drop
    kick Christian who only got three quarters to his feet which decks Christian. Orton
    awaits Christian to stand up as Christian swatts away his RKO attempt to avoid his
    finisher as Orton lands on his backside firmly which jolts Orton lower back too.

    MC
    Christian allows Orton to get up to inverted ddt him beforfe he can regain his composure.
    Christian gets to his feet as he pulls up Orton to whip him to the ropes & then meet him
    on his\return off the ropes to side on elbow shot with style to the face.

    JR
    My the tide has turned in this match, as Orton gets up using the ropes as Christian
    Peep kicks his face. Orton is on the ropes as he gets whipped to the opposite ropes
    by Christian so on Orton's return he can toe hold trip him throat first into the middle ropes.
    Christian facing the main camera stands on Orton back to rope choke him until the ref
    reaches a four count to break the rope choke.

    MC
    Christian again stands on his back to rope choke Orton a second time. Christian baits
    Orton in the process. Then Christian follows it up as he bellows at Orton what's wrong.
    Christian eventually lets up, then whilst leaving Orton trying to regroup Christian climbs
    to the top turnbuckle pad to wait for Orton to stand upright them he flying double elbow
    attacks Orton who counters.

    JR
    Orton certainly countered & how by doing a fantastic drop kick to Christian mid air to
    his chest which ends up knocking the wind out of both of them. They both landed heavily
    on the canvass. Who will take advantage first both are almost ready to be put away.

    MC
    Orton slowly gets to his feet as what the hell, BROCK LESNAR & WADE BARRETT
    both make their way to the ring wearing Nexus shirts & holding one. Orton sees them coming
    as he is distracted immediately by their presence.

    JR
    What businees do these two have at ring side ( MC ) in this number one contenders
    match. Orton better watch out from behind Christian tries to attack him. Orton drop
    kicks his face to send him into the ref as the ref holds Christian up to stop him
    bowling him over.

    MC
    Orton comes for Christian telling the ref to take his hands off him, as Randy Orton
    moved in trying to RKO Christian but not only did he move, but he also pulled the ref
    into the line of fire as Orton RKO the ref instead as the ref is out cold.

    JR
    What's this Brock Lesnar & Wade Barrett jump into the ring & they attack Christian as
    they double team him like a pack of dogs, whilst Orton looks on. Wade Barrett sets up
    Christian to wipe out finisher Christian. They both bail tothe floor, leaving Orton &
    Christian in the ring.

    MC
    Orton drops to his knees into the viper position, he pounds the canvass demanding
    Christian get up he does as Orton RKO's him. Orton gets up to the thunderous cheers
    of the fans, as Christian is almost out cold .

    JR
    Orton should go for the pin fall but the ref is still out. Orton stands over Christian as gets
    the look in his eyes. Orton slowly backs up as Christian tries to come around whilst on
    all fours.

    MC
    Orton takes off to punt kick Christian to his face as ( Brock Lesnar & Wade Barrett ) high
    five each other. Orton looks at the fans with his viper expression, then motions to Brock
    Lesnar to come in, as the ref is still out of it. Brock Lesnar picks up Christian to F 5 him.

    JR
    Meanwhile Wade Barrett is shoving the ref to bring him around as Orton pins Christian
    unaware what has transpired. The crowd is booing orton & Nexus as Wade Barrett bails out
    of the ring as the ref crawls over to begin the count.

    MC
    Orton is screaming at the ref to count as the ref eventually begins the count 1.................2..........................3 it's over as the fans half boo & half cheer the result.

    JR
    Brock Lesnar & Wade Barrett wait outside the ring for the announcement. As
    we go to the ring announcer for the official result


    RING ANNOUNCER

    The winner of the match & new number contender Randy Orton




    JR
    Omg Wade Barrett & Brock Lesnar climb back as they toss Christian out of the ring getting medical assistance to leave the ring. Barrett hands a Nexus shirt to Orton he stares at them
    & then puts the shirt on as they high 5 each other in the ring

    MC
    All new three members of the new Nexus stand in the ring as one with their arms raised
    what will happen now that Orton & Lesnar have joined Barrett & the new Nexus outfit.

    JR
    Join us next week as we try to get to the bottom of this turn of events.


    END OF MATCH 6














    Last edited by jimmie; 08-09-2011 at 07:12 AM. Reason: THE END OF MY FIRST FULL SMACKDOWN

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    please check my SMACKDOWN SHOW out the show

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    dont know how others feel about this, but the over-use of pictures is making it impossible for me to get any interest. I would prefer a simple text over an over-use of pictures anyday. And the last thing i would like to see is a small pic of Jerry Lawler about 5 times in a show. I dont even give him that many lines in my show, not to say that you should not focus on the commentators.

    There is an abrupt use of CAPS LOCK IN TEXT in between normal text. Refrain from it. Just look at any show of some BTBs around here (preferably Ed's WWE 2011) and get an idea of the whole presentation thing.

    Bold and Center align the heading to make it different from your other capital lettered text.

    Use of Blue and Black looked random to me in Smackdown. Make a rule where to use Blue and where to follow Black text. Like you can do Blue for promos or dialogues, and Black for writing the match. That will separate out them and make it easy to follow.

    "Sheamus: Listen to me, Fella" is better than a pic of Sheamus and then abrupt blank space and the next line saying "Listen to me, Fella"

    I am real bad at presentation and I could find so many flaws in your show. Just improve upon them, you have just started and can go a long way. Best of luck.

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    really really appreciate the feed back & promise to use all your suggestions. See I got banged no knew when matches started or finished, so that's why I turned to use so many pictures in my format to try to make it clear when matches start & finish. But would it still be ok to use the pictures when stating a match is about start as I notice from readig many other BTB that they do it too use photos to illiustrate when matches start not so much end. But read over your suggestion & then reading over my work I can understand were your coming from with the over use.
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